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for Till Death Do Us Part

by SorceressArcher

schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update as soon as you can I wanna know whats going to happen next and what will happen to Ceci. Update update update. It was awesome. Also, if you could please email me to let me know youhave updated I would greatly appreciate it. Ja Mata Misawo
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When writing the love scenes between Luther and Caecelija, even if the scenes are intended to be violent, please refrain from using crude terms like 'cock', 'cum', 'cunt', 'pussy', 'juice', 'ass', 'fuck' if you want the scenes to work out. What if Caecelija were to become pregnant and give birth at such a young age? In case you go in that direction, read Young Mothers Birth Stories for ideas. Please update soon.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I love your work. This was such a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm so glad I found this. Thank you for a wonderful read.
person Slinki
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! So when's the next chapter going up?
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. I hope you update it soon.
person katie
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG THIS STORY IS AWESOME AND SHE'S SO SWEET AND LUTHER IS HOT AND CRUEL but he's so nice to celia (srry can't remember her full name)and wow i feel bad for the general ,oh please oh please PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE OH PLEASE OOH PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY IS AWESOME OH SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person whitknee
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
did you stop writing this story?? cuz it's really good... i remember reading it and waiting for more but it never came... please tell me you haven't dropped it...
person Lita
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what happened to this story? I was really getting into it! I need more chapters! pleeeeeaase?????
person Selene Ann Potter
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I really love your story and was wondering when are you going to update a new chapter. Hope it\'s soon Ok laters then
person Tessany
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... Very interesting so far. I am intrigued to see just where you plan on taking this story. Keep up the good work.