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for The silver shores massacre

by shadowrulah

schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I aint done and I aint dead here we go again
person Torne
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, unbeleievably short chapters, but you get the point across and thats what counts. There are some grammer mistakes, but all in all its pretty good. And is it just me....or is evil always scarrier when it comes in short packages? Chuckie, leprechan, critters, the list is endless. Though I must say the whole girl saying your going to die here kinda felt resident evil-ish to me. Not flaming or anything, just felt the need to point that out....Im awkward like that. Keep up the good work.



~Love Torne