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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! This is really awesome, and really, really messed up *h*. Don\'t stop writing this, I\'m so intruiged! I\'m actually hearing sound effects in my mind while reading this, and the details you\'re giving are so freaking visual. Excellent! Keep it up, please!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a cool chapter :) erotic dreams grrrr lol Keep up the good work, update soon!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your overall-plot seems very interesting. Looking forward to more. :D
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it. I can\'t wait to read more! PLEASE update soon!!!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! I like this story very much :) Gabriel\'s a cutie and the others are quite mysterious O_O I like it! Update soon! I want to know what\'s going on :P
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it\'s a rather interesting idea (I have a thing for brothers :p), but I recommend you change the title so it\'s easier to remember and more catchy. Or something. Meh. ::returns to lurking::