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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not very fond of paranormal stories, but I must say that you\'re developing this one very nicely. Be sure to elaborate on your descriptions, though! Good job.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not to bad... i like it but my piece of constructive critisizum try not to be to shy with descriptions explain what everyone looks like in clear detail it helps the readers get a better visual. ^^ write more i look foward to it