rate_review Reviews

Great story! Very clear, easy to read prose, with some beautiful descriptive passages -- particularly when you talk about the underwater cave as seen through Ally\'s eyes, and Morgan\'s bed with its kelp-stuffed mattress and seasilk sheets. Morgan and Ally both seem like very real people, who the reader can easily identify with. I look forward to seeing their romance develop.

Love,
Falcon

hey this fic seem pretty interesting
like to c how it goes!
good job