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Did I mention I love Sin?

Sarah seemd to need a big sister she could confine in, and Sin just fit into this role.

Now Zip, but somehow I don\'t think it will be hard to get him back if Sarah keeps in mind that he\'s scared.

Shoot, how did I miss this update? Well thank God Lianna\'s okay. I would have flipped to have their story end happily before only to have her randomly (well, not so randomly) die in another.

I enjoyed Sin\'s reaction to her knowing his real name. I can imagine Sarah being harassed later on by the others to see is she will crack.

Yes! Finally! Sarah is doing some growing up and possibly understanding Zip a little better. I just hope that Zip will at least talk with her and get their true feelings out to one another. Wonderful chapter and I am soo glad Lianna is ok now.

fabulous! thank you!

Hmmm cool chapter....loved the name discssion part *wink* ....so umm i wonder what shes gonna do now....i would guess asking chris out to make zip jealous or something .....or a serious talk or something but that hasnt seemed to work lately

I can\'t guess the plot point this time hmmmm

I think Sarah was great in that chapter sooo i keep championing her i can\'t wait for the next update

i haven\'t been reading for a while, what with exams and my computer was on the fritz, so i had a lovely lot of chapters to read. they were really good, but what i was really impressed at was the thoroughness with which you replied to reviews. it shows a real involvement with your piece and dedication to it. try and maintain this if you can. oh, and keep writing!!!

Ugh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is a good place to leave a cliff hanger but I will admit that I hate it, I want to know what is going on. Keep up the good work.

Lolz.. I may have made a comment about the story straying away from Zip and Sarah but that\'s only because Lianna was practically on her death bed and it was pure torture I tell you. But now that she\'s okay, I loved that you added that in there.=P I can\'t believe you made me tear up again. Seriously though, your writing gets me so emotionally involved, sometimes I hate it but then I truly love it.
Now the task at hand, Zip and Sarah. Will they or won\'t they? Glad that Sin gave her a piece of her mind and some sense of direction. Dying for the next chapter now! Thanks for posting.

Hey, The story keeps getting better. I am glad you didn\'t let them die. And I hope Zip and Sarah can work things out. Because they are made for each other. Can\'t wait tell you post again. PLEASE POST SOON. And I hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving.

What a great chapter! I\'m so glad Lianna is going to be ok. And it\'s very cool that Sin isn\'t freaking out as much as Sarah and Zip thought she would. Once again, you\'ve succesfully made the characters realistic and multidimensional. I can\'t wait for the next update.