rate_review Reviews

What a way to end that chapter. I didn't want it to end but of course, it had to. So much happened. I loved the inner turmoil going on in Zip and how you wrote it. It was so beautifully done with his stubborness and fear both tugging at one another. And the way he had those flashbacks before lying to Sarah were great and the perfect way to know that Zip was lying. It's about time that Sarah realized how lucky she is to have such amazing friends and talk about romantic with Zip just kissing her like that. It was all so perfect, Tirch. Amazing job. I cannot wait for the next chapter to see about Eddie. You wrote he had hurt on his face and not necessarily anger. I really don't think Eddie can just become so violently angry as others think. As much as he's pissed, I think killing Zip really isn't in Eddie's nature but we'll see. I have a big brother and let's just say that it must be a silent code amongst older brothers to constantly protect the little sisters from anything. And I mean anything. Great chapter and I can't wait to read more. Good luck with your move. Doesn't it suck when your life seems to have more going on in it then it seems possible to handle?

OH......SHIT!!!!

Well, the cat's out of the bag now!!!!

Let me tell you at first I was ready to kick Zip's ass.......men are such idiots!!!!!

Sin is absolutely too cool.........for her to see that Zip was a goner and being there for Sarah. That's awesome!!!

Brad Pitt and ice cream........a girl after my own heart!!!!

But out of it all I absolutely loved when Eddie asked Zip to remove his hand from his sisters ass

Chapter Rocked!!!!!

TTFN
Kelly
*Still Giggling*

Hey,

I didn't wnat to leve any responeses until I finished reading the story... I thought It was great.. You constantly make me laugh and cry in the same story and I think that is a Wonderful gift you have in your writing.. Please don't ever stop and keep posting for all of us lurkers to laugh and cry right along with your characters...

With Love from a Heavy Duty Lurker

1Hummer

YAYA update

great chapter one of the best.....and i have no compliants about any of the characters or the events...i thought zip would break down to sarah but he didnt nice touch.......sarah was great this chapter.....loved the ending hmmm i dont think eddie gonna take it too well....lol

see i can only guess a plot point once thats great writing i've been wrong the last few chapters....

so whats the likelihood of conclusion before the week of dec 7th lol.....im going home and wont be able to check on the story (however i dont wanna leave zip and sarah either i could read them everyday lol) ok hoping the moving is going well

can't wait for more chapter(s)

OMG how could you just leave it like this??? Oh please, please update soon I wish to see what happens with Eddie, Zip and Sarah since her brother caught them in the hallway.

I thought just occured to me i havent followed all your stories soo..a couple questions if u don't mind...do all the friends have a story???....if not are they all getting one???

ava doesn't have one but shes been doing stuff in the stories

soo if your planning more are there many???.....and if u finish all the friends are u doing a like epilogue wrap up for all the characters or leaving well enough alone

haha did u get what i meant aww well just curious don't have to answer but thought i throw it out there

I hope that you update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next! Keep up the good work!

I love it!!! You've done a great job bringing Zip's character to life. The name has a whole new ring to it now... Sarah seems a little... bland though. keep up the good work! you should talk to a publisher, you know? your characters are as good as any i've read in a hardbound novel.

One of the best storys I have ever read, I am hooked. Please keep writing!!!!

you have to write more! ive read about sin and about flame and now this one. i dont understand how you can be such a good writer, but i do know that i cant get enough of your writing! lol sorry if thats a little stawker-ish...but lease write more really really soon!