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Oh crap lol. Nice ending haha

Reviewing chapter 16, Zip makes me laugh but I gotta appreciate how honest he is. Zip is “Dickhead Von Cock”, that is too funny. I think I had it backwards, Sin is actually the more understanding one and Eddie will probably rip Zip’s head off. It was really mature of Sarah to go and ask Zip how he felt about her I wouldn’t even have the guts to especially knowing that he might not feel the same way. Girl friends are the best especially when it’s man trouble. Finally when they confess their love for one another the hurt/angry big brother shows up and I think we might see a side of Eddie that we don’t want to see. Oh dear. Thanks for updating.

Wonderful timing. Now that the lovers have found each other once again, I hope Eddie doesn't overreact too much. Enjoyed it. Keep writing!
GM

nice chapter! it'll be interesting now that eddie's found out--but, now that they've both finally admitted that they love each other--i'm guessing that the story's winding to a close...? at any rate, i think the way you timed eddie's entrance right when zip and sarah had made up was brilliant, but i think it was really your writing that carried the scene through. i mean, if you hadn't gotten your audience so caught up with zip and sarah, eddie's entrance would've seemed so contrived, what with sin's earlier comment. so, kudos for an awesome job :)

on a sidenote, i'd have preferred it if sarah had made zip suffer a bit longer for being such a dickhead, but that's just the bloodthirsty, vindictive bitch in me i suppose. one thing i've noticed about almost all romance stories is that it's always the girl who's the first to apologize, the boy who blows her off, and the girl who accepts him right back. oh well.

HOLY FUCK it just got good!

I can't help but commenting again, but you leave me no choice T!!!! AWESOME ending I love it that Eddie walked in on them as they get back together. I can't wait to see his reaction. These are the reasons I somtimes want to wait until a story is completed so I can read the next chapter right away and not be held in suspense.

That was a really good chapter. I am so glad that Zip finally realized his feelings. I absolutely LOVE Sin, she is great! She is the person that I would kill to be... confident and strong and all out funny. Anyways good chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!

What a horrible cliffhanger to leave us hanging with. I can't wait to see how this goes down.

OH MY GOD... THIS IS QUITE POSSIBLY THE BEST STORY IVE READ ALL YEAR... ZIP IS... AMAZING. My goodness Tirch, I almost died of happiness when Zip finally confessed... Can't wait for your next update... Also, I love how its so real. Lianna and Joseph were too good to be true. But this... this is your best work ever! I love Zip and Sarah!!! I think it got a little weird when sarah became bratty because zip is also immature. its nice when they're kept as polar opposites. i also love how even though Zip is wilder than Joseph, his relationship with sarah is much more chaste as in, they dont have threesomes, etc. this is an awesome fic. I'll check everyday for your updates!

Keeeee! I love what you've done with this story! :P That last chapter was just perfect, right up to the end of it. :P

Poor Eddie. I'd hate to be in his shoes right now. And if I were Sarah, I'd be completely torn between jumping for joy at the fact that they've gotten back together, or mortified at being caught by Eddie. :D

Your stories rock! Yay for things finally taking a turn for the better!