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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that they made it! I am happy that you allowed Zip and Sarah to be together, I love it! I am also excited to see what story you come up with next... maybe one about Ava? That would be cool since she is the only one left without love. I think it would be a good idea, but whatever you decide to write next I am sure will be great, I mean you haven't dissappointed me so far!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg so that's the end to this great series?! wow. *claps* your writing is soooo great. I get attached to the characters quite easily. Cant wait to read some of the other ones you've worked on =)
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA!!!! OMG OMG- hehehe- "can you please get your hands off my sister's ass?" That ROCKED!!!!! i love it, i love it, i love it.....
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well you certainly left a cliff hanger, but Im not all that excited. Usually Im all antzy and anticipating the next chapter to the point where I want to super-glue you toa chair and watch your write the damn thing. I just think the drama in this story has already climaxed. However, that was a great chapter with a lot of things I liked. Definately what was needed.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit mother fucker! excuse my language.. but this is one good cliffhanger.. update soon.. oh jesus I can't wait to see what happens.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great girl.
Sin showed her bitchy side we all love. Now let's see Eddie's reaction. I'm sure it is going to be fun, even if he's likely to be hurt by his sister and gf's lies.
Sin showed her bitchy side we all love. Now let's see Eddie's reaction. I'm sure it is going to be fun, even if he's likely to be hurt by his sister and gf's lies.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK! Wonderful chapter! I'm glad Zip finally came around, and I'm glad Sin gave him hell for it (after participating in the "porn and popcorn" slumber party...oh Sin, how i love you! lol). The thing with Eddie is rather unfortunate...hmm...it'll be interesting to see sarah wiggle out of this one. Hopefully Sin can calm him down though.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops, Busted! *waits for Eddie to go Excorsist on Sarah and Zip*
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The characters are coming along quite nicely. I like the way you manage to preserve the original charater personalities from story to story. I can't wait to see how things will play out with this latest little drama. Looking forward to what you come up with next.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK! AAACCKKK!
Wow, I literally jumped when Eddie showed up. I felt guilty myself! I wonder how the other girls are going to deal with all this. Is Eddie going to be pissed at Sin for knowing about it and not telling him? Seems like an Eddie thing to do... Holy shit, that was an awesome, awesome chapter! Hope everything is going well with your move, and please update again soon!!
Wow, I literally jumped when Eddie showed up. I felt guilty myself! I wonder how the other girls are going to deal with all this. Is Eddie going to be pissed at Sin for knowing about it and not telling him? Seems like an Eddie thing to do... Holy shit, that was an awesome, awesome chapter! Hope everything is going well with your move, and please update again soon!!