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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just realised how far along this story actually is. It feels like it just started a couple days ago and now it's already ending. But it has been a good one so far, and now I look forward to seeing how the other one you started continues on when you're done.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing chapter 17, it was very cute especially towards the end. You know what they say the woman makes the man or something like that. Too bad Eddie didn't flip out but that's Eddie always the nice guy. Hey, do what you feel is right for the story. I'm just happy it's going to end happily. I have to go to class. Thanks for updating.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw.. this was very good but at least things are turing for the better right? I mean Zip and Sarah are in love and there no longer hidding things from Sin and Eddie even if he did find out the hard way. Anyway's very good I really liked
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOO I saw that coming. Great chapter...er chapters considering I review the last. ^_^ Update asap! P.S. Good Luck with moving!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to do an Ava story.
I love her. And relate to her so well.
Good chapter that answered a lot of questions.
And I think it's great that this is a (in the sense of action in the story) shorter story then the rest of your stories.
Mostly because Sarah and Zip's romance was so quick it would be weird to have a long drawn out story.
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I love her. And relate to her so well.
Good chapter that answered a lot of questions.
And I think it's great that this is a (in the sense of action in the story) shorter story then the rest of your stories.
Mostly because Sarah and Zip's romance was so quick it would be weird to have a long drawn out story.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter !!!!
I glad things are wrapping but i love zip and sarah i wish they weren't ending LOL.......
now i wanna see everyone trying to get zips name LOL
OK thanx hehe i hope i didnt bombard you with questions was just curious
I glad things are wrapping but i love zip and sarah i wish they weren't ending LOL.......
now i wanna see everyone trying to get zips name LOL
OK thanx hehe i hope i didnt bombard you with questions was just curious
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only a few chapters left?! Nuuuuuu. Lol, I love this story. I'm totally addicted and I am a Zip fanatic :P Shniffles. Although, saying that, I can't wait to read more of Strangers In Passing. So, seeing as there's only a few chapters left...how about some uber kinky Zip action? Teehee!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good chapter and yes, things did get tied up a little too tidy but what's wrong with that? Honestly, sometimes life can surprise you and friends don't kill friends and brothers grudingly accept sisters growing up and complete assholes can fall in love and begin to become nice guys. It was a perfect chapter for Zip and Sarah and just for him to say I love you over and over was romantic and definitely shows the new side to him and what Sarah has done to him. I can't wait to read about the double wedding- it's about damn time! Have I told you that you're the best author on this site in my opinion? Well, you are. Can't wait for an update!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for letting Eddie freak out.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to review, but truthfully I don't know what to say. You know I love all your stories. They have been a huge inspiration for me. As long as u keep writing I'll keep reading. You don't know how excited I get when I log on and see that you have posted again. Its like Christmas every morning. LOL..... Anyway I am so happy for Sarah and Zip. I am glad the no one flew off the handle too bad.... Sin is still probably my favorite Character of all time. I just love her. Anyway keep the stories coming... Great Chapter.