rate_review Reviews

Oooo... I LOVE the title to this one. And YAY! Now it\'s Zip\'s turn. I was hoping you\'d pair him with Sarah. I can\'t wait to see how big brother Eddie reacts to his little sister dating the man who tried to steal his girlfriend away. That\'s so... risque of you! Eagerly awaiting a new chapter!

sarah and zip sound like an interesting match-up... i suppose it really depends on how deep zip\'s character is though. i just can\'t imagine smart, spunky sarah staying together with a guy who\'s all flash and nothing else. anyway, i\'m really looking forward to this story. but... more madison and tavian, please? they\'re my favorite couple :p

Ok. I know I\'ve already reviewed and I should be studying for a test I have in an hour but I read this chapter again and thanks for Joseph and Lianna. You know how I adore them. And also, about the title. Is it the song by Jessica Riddle? Or is the title just a coincidence?

at first i wasnt sure where this was headed, but now i see. great idea, i really like the connections and cant wait to see what you do with this!

awesome so thats what ............damit...but if this story sin professed her love to eddie...then god damit WHAT IS SHE GOING TO SAY NEXT CHAPTER IN ORGINAL SIN! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! u evil evil author damn it!

OMG I\'m so excited! I love it when you start new stories :) I\'ve always hoped that we would get a story that involves Zip a bit more as I feel he\'s a brilliant character. I can\'t wait to see where this one goes :)

YES! I rock! *does a little dance* I was so excited to see you had a new chapter up so quickly! I\'m so pumped about this story, and I\'m kinda glad you\'re not going the fluffy route with this one. That wouldn\'t really suit Zip\'s character. BTW, what the hell is his real name? lol I freaking loved this line >> ‘Snap out of it,’ Sarah yelled at herself. ‘God, he used to date Sin. That’s about as close as you could get to incest without actually having to worry about having kids with twelve toes.’ LMAO You crack me up... Anyhoo, fantastic job so far. Can\'t wait for more!

Okay. So I need to learn how to say everything in one review but, and obviously, you can\'t give away your entire plot but I just hope that Zip really has changed and he won\'t go after Sarah just to get back at Eddie in some sort of twisted, vengeful way.

It\'s back!!!! So awesome! Cant wait!! =)

Wahoo! New story :D! I never got the chance to start reviewing Original Sin, so I\'ll start with this one! Fluffy isn\'t bad. Fluffy is good :D! Great start though. I liked Sarah (o.o it is so hard to type her name with the \'h\' xD) in OS, and kinda had a feeling she was up for a story of her own. But it\'s also great that Joseph/Lianna, Eddie/Sin is in there as well. Most people have a har dtime pulling it off, but I think you\'ll be fine at it :D

Looking forward to more.