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oh wow, he lit into Zip about that...dang!!! haha, good chapter, very well written, as always. do ya still want both the cookies and flowers, cuz I\'m kinda going broke ? haha, waiting for the next chapter anxiously

u know, i think i know why u got so many reviews already. OS was awesome as hell and this is the SEQUEL ofcourse ppl are dying to c this

Okay I\'ve read Original Sin and must say that i loved that story and this one is shaping up to be just as good! I cant wait until more!

Since I am just reading this story for the first time, when Zip couldn\'t remember the girls name and it was all similar to Sarah, I thought that is who he slept with. That would have been funny as hell as Eddie would probably have an actual reason to kill Zip...

I\'m a huge Zip fan lol. I\'ve been wanting to see more of him since we started LADCT and I\'m soooooo excited about this. I think Sarah\'s a great character aswell and I would love to see her and Zip together. It\'d be really interesting and a bit different.

Ok that was nice. I have to ask though. What is with all the caps in your comments. I finally decided to ask..

Reviewing chapter 3, Zip just makes me laugh especially his thoughts basically this whole chapter made me laugh. Thank you for that because I was having a shitty day. You’re good Tirch really good especially towards the end of this chapter. I like where you’re taking this story. Sarah’s forbidden and will Zip listen I think not. Oh, how exciting this is. Thanks for updating.

Reviewing chapters 1-2, I really like this idea of Sarah and Zip. To be honest I’ve never thought of it. Zip might have a little problem with Sarah since she is Eddie’s sister and Zip was in love with Sin. Maybe Sarah will be a handful for Zip and maybe she could teach him something about a thing called love, hehe. I’m ready to root for Zip. I have a very good feeling about this story because it will be funny and full of Zip’s divaness. I so adore Lianna and Joseph I honestly can say I am never sick of reading about their love and mushiness. Thanks for starting a new story and I usually don\'t ask this but please update soon.

hey. new story! duh. haha, anyways, great to see that i wont have any reading withdrawels of ur story or sin and eddie. after original sin ended i was like, great, now i have to find a new story that actually catches my attention to read. but nope, u came to the rescue! lol. i also noticed that to set up original sin, you had eddie recovering from lost love, just like how zip is recovering from lost love. thought id point it out..dont know if u did it purposely or it just went that way...but either way, i like this story. i can relate to sarah a lot. i think any suburban girl can really. anyways, please update soON!

I am eager to see where this story ends up - I hope they get together soon!