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This is turning out to be very very interesting....

But I think you\'ll have to do better than this to top Original Sin and You Don\'t Know Me, since those are my two favorite stories of yours!

Just kidding, this one is turning out very well so far. Keep up the good work!

I think i want to cry....what are they doing????!!!!! please tell me Zip introduces her to his younger brother or something!!!!! lol- she\'s still a brat- but maybe as she matures that might change...hopefully....i don\'t like her yet though...although Zip on the other hand...I like how you made another part of him come out in this story while still maintaining his bad-ass appearance....but then again you\'re very talented sooo......yeah- no surprise there- pretty soon i\'ll probably be loving sarah.....just great...i like not liking her... :(...lol- update soon!!!

hehehe- oh yeah- the Exacto knife comment- lol- hilarious!!

Reviewing chapter 4, what’s with Zip and his cocky grin and secrets, hahaha. Zip is a riot. I think Zip is more scared of Sin than Eddie, hahaha. Thanks for updating.

Ok. Hopefully, this will just be one review. Great chapter. I can\'t wait for Sarah and Zip to go back to his apartment and hopefully just talk and not \"talk\". Also, the name of the chapter was great. I kept singing the song from All American Rejects. Can\'t wait for the update!

Whee! The drama and craziness builds. It really makes you wonder how things would be if they were on her turf...would the roles be reversed in Ohio? Oh, and I laughed aloud at Zip\'s little internal conversation there at the end. You rock so hard, and I\'m possibly more excited about this story than any of your other ones. Update soon, please!

very good please update again soon

It would be nice to see Sarah and Zip end up together. They basically are made for each other, other then the fact of Eddie and Sin... Still I think thats how it should be. Maybe Eddie will flip a lid, Sin will kill Zip (not literally), and Zip will fuck up a few times but he still acted like he really cared for Sin at the end of Original Sin...

ahhh...hmmm...the story is awesome.....but in my opinion- which seriously means shit- i am now thinking that I would hate it if Zip and Sarah did end up together....it just doesn\'t seem....right....but anyway- your story- lol- you get to decide!!! I\'d like to know a little more about Madison though...you allude to her personality...but never really \"focus\" on her...maybe for your next story.... :)

oh- and Sarah....about her....in the story you mention that she really didn\'t care what her friend was saying about Zip anyway--- SEEEEEEE- SPOILED LITTLE BRAT!!!! this girl makes me nervous! She really is just a kid.....I REALLY wouldn\'t want her to end up with Zip just because she would be getting what SHE wants and not caring that everyone else around her would be hurt......spoiled selfish brat....she deserves to see him fall in love with like Ava or something....I really don\'t like her...lol- is it obvious? :)