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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. zip\'s sort of not being a dick anymore :p anyway, keep up the awesome work :)
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:(...i still don\'t think they should end up together...it is just soo wrong...
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good. i really liked how both of them were dissuaded by thier respective friends. could this be a change for zip? could he be the one for sarah? I can\'t wait to find out.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know who is in more danger right now lol
Who is the hunter and who is the prey? Seems like Zip is on the other side for once.
Eddie is going to freak out once he\'ll learn about that. I can\'t wait ;p
Who is the hunter and who is the prey? Seems like Zip is on the other side for once.
Eddie is going to freak out once he\'ll learn about that. I can\'t wait ;p
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually like Zip in this chapter. and yes, Sarah is still getting on my nerves. who the heck goes out in new york to a club by herself, especially, as she reminds everyone, a girl from a small town. I could poke her eye out, but not really. I think it would be really great if they got together, then another guy came along..and I don\'t know, you do such a good job. and chocolate chips?! peanut butter all the way!! but I guess I can make an exception for you *tosses a cookie* there ya go
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord... and the drama begins! lol She is so innocent when it comes to the big city life style! Rule #1 of going out: bring a buddy! lol. Lovin the story as always ;o)
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heeheehee! Love it, love it, love it! :P
I think it\'s unfair, actually, the way people never seem to let go of the past. Take Sarah and Zip, for example. Sarah will forever be Eddie\'s little sister, and Zip will forever be that asshole player lead singer from Broken Dynamite. I mean, if they have a shot at happiness together, then why shouldn\'t they take it? :D But the people around them, and they themselves actually, will force them to hold back, at least until the point where they can\'t take it anymore. If anything, Sin and Eddie should be happy for Zip, that he\'s finally got someone to love :D Of course, I understand why they might tend to be a tad too overprotective -__-\'
I dunno. I just love unexpected happenings :D Keep up the great work!
I think it\'s unfair, actually, the way people never seem to let go of the past. Take Sarah and Zip, for example. Sarah will forever be Eddie\'s little sister, and Zip will forever be that asshole player lead singer from Broken Dynamite. I mean, if they have a shot at happiness together, then why shouldn\'t they take it? :D But the people around them, and they themselves actually, will force them to hold back, at least until the point where they can\'t take it anymore. If anything, Sin and Eddie should be happy for Zip, that he\'s finally got someone to love :D Of course, I understand why they might tend to be a tad too overprotective -__-\'
I dunno. I just love unexpected happenings :D Keep up the great work!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked Joseph\'s comments at the end. Funny. Anyway, i liked the chapter. I can\'t wait to read more. Please update soon!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww man lol that was a hilarious chapter, stupid idiot listen to ur concious! (cries i know i spelled that crap wrong!)