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for Even Angels Fall

by Tirch

person Kina
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9-fr what i know from previous chapters, the manager of the band's name is veronica & not victoria....
person Rosemary
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all , I am so excited to see that you updated! I am really sorry that moving went so extremely horrible for yall. I hope it gets better for yall. I am so happy that you gave this story a great ending, although I am sad to see it end, it was a wonderful story to read! I have really enjoyed myself. I am also excited to see how Strangers In Passing comes along. I hope yall are doing better!
person megan
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful.
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing chapter 18, I've missed you too of course:) I'm glad your safe and yeah, moving is always shitty. Finally this lovely and humorous story has come to an end and it was the sappiest happiest ending that I've tremendously have enjoyed reading. Good work. Tavian and Madison aren't mention that much but they are another cute couple that made me laugh. After reading this chapter I do feel that love does and can conquer all. I think I'll puke now, just kidding. Thank you very much for having such a witty sense of humor. I had no idea you had a new story posted, which you can believe I'll read. Thanks for writing and finishing it.


person templeton21
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on the move and that nothing too bad happened. :) The chapter was perfect to the story and it gave everyone closure. There were no dire uncertanities that will have your readers killing you over and there is nothing wrong with a perfect ending.
person Anne
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
where, pray tell, is the end of this story?!
person 1hummer
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you that I'm still highly enjoying this story and hope that you keep writing...
person ecstatic
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so that's the end, huh? i like it. i'm glad that sin and eddie weren't too disrupted, because seeing as they are so close and all, i didn't think that this should split them too severely. i like the last part with our two leads, it was a good and sweet finish. but the boring, tying-up conversation with madison and ava seemed unnecessary but unfortunately realistic. i have friends who make similar meaningless jokes after a tense conversation or situation, so i understand it. but i don't have to like it. anyway, that was really good. the second from last chapter, especially. keep it up, and write more coz we're all waiting!!
person rosie
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh bo ho- she got what she wanted the little baby....and such a sappy ending- usually i like the romantic stuff...but please- i'm so in love with you- and i'm so in love with you too- oh my- i love you so much- I love you too....makes me sick....yuck....lol- no fair!!!! Sarah got who she wanted!!!!!! :(
Albeit, a very good story mind you....