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Reviewing chapter 6, I feel for Zip the secret friendship he has with Sarah is making him a nervous wreck. I like this chapter because it reveals how much of an influence Sarah has on him already. Zip made me laugh so hard when he and Sarah were talking about virginity then silence and then her response. Yep, base on this chapter Zip and Sarah are made for each other. Thanks for updating.

You are such a witty writer, that virgin-retarded comment made me laugh for probably 10 mins.

Omg!!!! I have not read any thing for awhile, but today i finished up OS, and started this story........ I must say u are fukin awesome. I always had this soft spot for Zip, and I like the idea of him gettin to know someone on a different level. Although the story line was a wee bit perdicatble....... u are a master of twists and spins, I an definately sure i will love this story, as i love all ur stories. Keep it up and I hope u post soon.

Yeah it wasn\'t your best, a bit short but it wasn\'t your worst and that is what counts (I think?). Hopefully though you will make up for it in the next chapter... Other then that my only problem with this was that you made them friends again or at least I thought they became freinds again much to fast. (That was your most confusing chapter).

oh, I am so tired, but apparently not tired enough to miss your story when you update! great, good, terrific, all those wonderful words flow through my mind. I really wanna kick Zip every now and then though, and it seems like Sarah is starting to grow up a bit, because she knew when to hold back her words. but only a bit. wouldn\'t it just be awesome if Chris ended up falling in love with Sarah and then Zip and Chris get in a fist fight? but only the physical fighting part. I dunno, that\'d be a new addition to this storyline. anyhoo, here\'s your nasty chocolate chip cookie for a job well done.

until next time
sammo_00

I simply have to say that I love Zip and Sarah together!! And well I absolutely LOVE your story! And now I want to know what Zip\'s real name is. I even looked it up...but well no names I should repeat!*lol* please update soon and you\'re absolutely great, that you write about Zip and Sarah- I love them

*blinks* Wow... a whole lot of drama here... I can\'t believe Sarah and Zip actually said those things to one another.... anyway awesom chapter I hope Zip tells Sarah the truth and tell her just how much he likes her for Zip might not know it but Eddie and Sin might not take it the wrong way like he thinks

yay! that was a really cute, feel-good chappie ;) of course, you also left both Sarah and Zip feeling very very confused, but yeah. :P

I\'m actually more into Sarah/Zip now than I initially was. You just write them so well! Sarah MAY be a virgin, but she\'s definitely not shy or meek or anything like that. She\'s got the ability to keep Zip in line, and that\'s a huge thing, considering just how asshole-y he can get sometimes. But she can somehow see past all of that, and see him for the sweetheart he really is :P

Keep up the great work! I love your stories!

Bad idea, really. I love it *grin*

omg it\'s soooo good. i thought, oh i\'ve got a coupla minutes to spare, just pick one to read. and it was sooo good, i spent 45 minutes!!!! please keep going. this could so be published or something!!!!!! you built it up really well - despite being obvious in the beginning. i know i\'ve got stacks of friends who would buy this if it were in a book-form!! put up more chapters coz i want more!!!