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At this point, I just want to hug Sarah. The poor dear! :( Of course, she should already have expected it, I think, given who Zip is. I swear, that girl is setting herself up for heartbreak! :P Then again, if I were in her shoes, I\'d probably do the exact same thing, so yeah...

Reform Zip! Make him face his feelings! Hahahaha... it sounds so cliche, I know >.< Oh well. Looking forward to more of your story! Hurray for this new chappie!

oh another wonderful chapter keep it up

With every chapter there is, I fall even more in love with this story, the characters (and you). Teehee. I just love the drama and the tension - there\'s so much chemistry between Zip and Sarah and it\'s extremely compelling. I\'m just looking forward to the next chapter now!

Yeah I had meant length.. I didn\'t realize my font size was set down so low (font size 8). I was reading this late at night so that is why.. Sorry your right it wasn\'t short.. Yet again an excellent chapter.. Now to wonder when they will finally admit it that they don\'t care about sin and eddie in this regard... (Hmm I wonder if we smacked them upside the head they would finally say who cares what those 2 think and get together)

Man... so much tension and noone even knows yet! I can\'t imagine what\'ll happen if someone catches them or they let it slip somehow.

i was sooo angry with zip for being such a bastard to her. and i\'m so glad that she got to throw a few punches of her own. keep going!!

I think you are doing a wonder job with your character development. When you first started this story the characters were the types that you loved to hate. (Selfish spoiled, and immature). You have somehow turned those terrible charter flaw into interesting imperfections, that we see manifest themselves in almost endearing ways at times. I have found that I like them. I really like Zip because he is trying to do the right thing and maintain some since of honor in his friendship with Sin while he is developing feelings with Sarah, I think it would be best if he and Sarah just come clean to Sin and Eddie that they want to start a relationship at least then it won’t be built on dishonesty and secrets. Plus I think Sin and Eddie would take it better if told than if they somehow see Sarah and Zip kissing in the hospital when Joseph’s baby is born (Although that would be interesting)

Anyway I’m really enjoying this story and I can’t wait to see how it turns out.

Oh, that was mean. You completely BS\'d me about revealing his real name, you biatch. lol Just kidding, I love you. Mac and cheese, huh? That sounds familiar... lol And that\'s my favorite food, too. Love it. Nice job, can\'t wait for more.

THANK GOD! Yes, I did ask for a kiss so thank you so much. I wasn\'t surprised how Zip acted afterwards because right now, he\'s kind of being stupid. I understand being confused about how you feel about someone, especially a guy like Zip being confused but he needs to stop it already. He likes Sarah, he KNOWS he likes Sarah and he cooked dinner for her. Zip just either needs to be with her completely or stop doing this whole half-in, half-out bullshit.

Bah. Technicalities, wench... lol This chapter was ::whoo:: hot. It\'s about GDmned time they gave in, and I find it absolutely hilarious how many times Zip calls himself an asshole each chapter. He\'s such a trip. So anyway, YAY for fast updates. You\'re my most favorite person ever. Keep it up! ::hugz::