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Good chapter.... nice to see some drama developing. Now, lets get another chapter up so I can find out what the two of them are going to do about the situation!

lol- no no no...don\'t be sorry!! I\'m HAPPY I hate Sarah- lol- it makes me check for updates like every 2 minutes! ( Okay, maybe that\'s stretchign it....) damn...i know i\'m being naive here....but i really do hope they don\'t end up together....it\'s just not fair....the spoiled brat get\'s exactly what she wants... :*(

You are a terrible, terrible tease!!!!!

Saw the shout out.....would have reviewed the last one but internet was down since Wednesday.......talk about hell.

I do like how you are building the characters. Yes, both have to mature but Sarah is ahead of the game being a girl. Guys always have to catch up.

Had to giggle when Zip made her dinner then questioned his own motives for doing it. That guy is a mess......it fun to see a guy fucking with his own head for once.

I think that they could be happy together but I see a bumpy road ahead of them before it happens.

Love the story and will continue to watch for updates.

TTFN
Kelly

Zip is acting like an a*****e isn\'t he? However I dont really blame him in a way. Sin just dumped him, he\'s now being turned inside out by Sarah who is Eddie\'s sister (and he\'s supposed to hate Eddie) right. In addition, everyone seems to be warning him away from Sarah, it seems as though everyone is against him!

However, hate that he spent the night with Carmen and hurt Sarah. Grrrrrrrrr.

Not flowing well? It\'s flowing fine. Who the hell said otherwise? You\'re doing a great job, as always, so don\'t worry your pretty little head about it... Anyway, I really like Chris. He kind of reminds me of Eddie in a whole nice guy who never seems to get the girl way. I hope he ends up finding someone. I loved this line >> ‘I have to make friends that aren’t cocky-arrogant-self-important-crossed-signal-giving-kiss-you-and-throw-you-out-rock-stars.\' LOL Sounds like Sarah has her work cut out for her. Excellent chapter; looking forward to more. :o)

That was an interesting chapter.
And the Dick-of-the-Year Award goes to.... Zip!
Man, he kisses her and then kicks her out with no explanation, sleeps with someone else(even though it\'s not cheating), makes assumptions about her and Chris, and breaks her heart in person, all in what, a period of a day or so?! Man, he might as well finish it and run over her dog. Make her truly miserable and hate him forever. Man, I\'m dying to find out what happens next now.
Is it me or does anyone else find it funny that Chris mirrors Eddie in the \"bestfriend\" role?

OMG! DON\'T DO THIS TO ME!!! my mouth is hanging open in shock...i just about cried when he told her to go away! nooo! I love this story soo much...Zip is my favorite character of yours. Please keep it up i love being frustrated when i read! you do this so well. THank you thank you! Did i mention that i love this story?

I like this story. The one thing that I think you might want to watch out for is how similar this story is starting to sound \"Like a dream come true\". I mean there is the innocent girl, the rock star, and now the nice but...guy. I can already see a story forming for Chris. I do like this story a lot. I think that it flows nicely and I always get giddy when I see it has been updated. Continue with the great work.

Reviewing chapter 8, Zip the dick is back and he’s jealous, well he should be because Chris is such a nice guy. I still think Chris has a chance if Zip keeps acting like this. This is Zip’s story right so the flow is fine:) Thanks for updating.

This was a great chapter and I can\'t wait to see what happens. I\'m curious at what Sarah will tell Eddie when she has dinner with him.... It\'s great keep going!