rate_review Reviews

Yeah!!!! He figured it out......good boy Zip!!!!

Now comes the shit hitting the fan when everyone else finds out. Somehow I think that Joesph will have to put up one hell of a defense for his friend.

Can\'t wait to see how it all comes down.

Very good job!!!!

TTFN
Kelly

Hey
this is the first time ive read ur story
and i gotta say, u got to ignore wht the other people are saying cos this is an amazing story
just keep up wht ur doing cos ur doing a great job!
cant wait for the nxt update

Boo Hiss for misunderstandings and revenge sex! Argh! The utter madness and frustration of miscommunication!!!

And I actually haven\'t noticed any sort of flow issue. If there has been one, you\'ve more than made up for it by the way your characters interact with each other and themselves. I\'m also interested to see if Chris becomes more of a contender in Sarah\'s life. How dramatic would it be for her to let herself get involved with him, only to have Zip come to his senses shortly thereafter?! I crave updates!

Yay, another chapter! Man that was so wrong of Zip, I hope that he and Sarah talk with each other about what happened and they kiss and make up! lol

Well that was a twister... I sure hope that you do not keep this up for too much longer (Too much longer and I will have to think you are dragging this out..)

I think it\'s flowing just fine though I must admit, the idea of Zip and Sarah with anyone else right now isn\'t working for me. Obviously, it isn\'t going to stay that way, at least I hope it won\'t, but I\'m really enjoying this story. I had such a shitty day today but then you updated so yea! Seriously though. Good work and I cannot wait for the next chapter.

oh Zip, you stupid stupid stupid boy! wake up and face the fact that you LIKE Sarah! Stop being in denial already, before you push her away and hurt her so badly that she\'ll hate you for the rest of her life!

Chris really seems to be a sweetie. :) It\'s really neat that he and Sarah are such good friends because I think Sarah\'s in desperate need of one right now, what with Zip being fucked up. I don\'t really feel bad that he and Sarah didn\'t work out romantically, because I think he\'d make a better best friend than boyfriend anyway :)

I\'m really loving this story! Keep up the great work!

I dont have any problem with the flow. That maybe because I follow a few different stories and am use to jumping from one ot the other. Just my two cents. Great chapter!

Oooo...........interesting please update soon. I\'m surprised Chris put two and two together.... but maybe now Zip will come to terms that he is going to hurt sarah\'s feelings all because he\'s to bull headed to worry about what Sin will think when it\'s clear as day that all Sin wants to be is friends and he (zip) is only worried about how Eddie and Sin will react... anyway I really enjoyed this chapter I hope you update again soon

This is not at all flowing like the previous stories that you\'ve done...

Which I like, since it\'s something new and different. I don\'t like how Zip doesn\'t realize what he has in front of him and instead just goes back to being his hormone-driven and emotionally-detached self. But I suppose that it DOES make the story more interesting...