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for Even Angels Fall

by Tirch

person Sideburns
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ALRIGHT! now that was a fantasticly steamy chapter.
person sammo_00
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha, sorry. I missed the last chapter cuz I\'ve been so busy with work. Three questions. One, when are Tavian and Meredith gonna get hitched? Two, when is Joseph gonna pop THE question? and Three, whatever happened to the erotica story you were writing, Common I do believe is the name? I was getting into that, then you just stopped it when you got way involved in this story line. I\'d be very happy if you continued with that. but anyhoo, back to this story...good job, as always. I like how Zip goes, I\'m going to go talk to her, then he yells and screams and gets nowhere. He actually regressed then, while Sarah...lying through her...well, I guess she regressed too, which sucked cuz she just told Eddie how she was all, I\'m growing up, yadda yadda. Haha, but good, here\'s your cookie.
person afici0nada
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I woke up, saw that you hadn\'t updated, read a new chapter on this other fic, and when I checked back, you had already updated! What a way to start the morning :)

That chapter was perfect, I think :) In fact, it was almost too perfect (almost, but not quite ;P). I kept expecting some interruption, like Eddie walking in on them or something >.< Hahahaha... I\'m glad Zip has finally confronted his feelings, although I think if I were in Sarah\'s shoes, I would\'ve made things a bit harder for him. Thankfully, she\'s nicer than I am. ;)

Congratulations, and as always, great work!
person megan
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Keep it up. Please update soon and all that jazz.
person Memory Chase
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! I seriously almost started crying when Zip told Sarah his name...... That was totally classic. Bravo Bravo I can\'t friggin wait for an update.........U see I\'m addicted ......as always
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an awsome chapter. Yea Zip realizese he was a complete ass. Update ASAP-please!!
person LKN
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t stand Paris Hilton but I had to say, that was hot! Had me jumping on my husband for a quickie.
I\'m so glad that they know how the other feels now and they\'re at the point where they want the same things. Now I\'m dying to know if everyone else will want the same thing for them.
And I think you mentioned the ex that keeps calling her like a psycho stalker a few times and I\'m wondering if you had any other ideas for him. I know, I tend to pick up and keep weird things like that in the back of my head.
person BC
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always, just outstanding. Maybe Zip\'ll grow up now...

...and good for you for venting on the Anon Flamer. Anybody who is that senseless and insensitive has no opinion I care to read...

And as for you amateur standing, I think you should promote yourself to \"Semi-Pro\" :-)

BC
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two words: Mama Like.
person rosie
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why...why...WHY.....did you go and make me like Sarah!!! WHY DID YOU DO IT!!!! Damn, I was HAPPY not liking the girl!!!!!HAPPY!!! :*(...i don\'t like you so much now...lol- j/k...okay...here\'s the thing....she\'s still a spoiled brat...but ...she didn\'t want Zip anymore just because she \"wanted him\"..she truly has feeling for him...that\'s what did it for me....damn....still can\'t get over it....although....i would totally agree with Eddie and Sin if they blew the roof on Sarah...she should have told them before deciding to get in a relationship with Zip ( seeee- I\'m considering actual relationship with the guy now...major step forward for me!! :) ) hmmmm.....i dunno....I don\'t hate the girl...although maybe saying I like her is too strong....hehe- we\'ll see what happens after this amazing first time experience you just wrote....what will she ( and he) do now....i think the way they - well mostly she for me- handle this...will decide my fututre \"feelings\" towards sarah- lol.....anyway....update, update UPDATE!!!!! and i must say- i thoroughly enjoyed your author\'s note there ;)