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i loved chapter 8 and 9 :D both zip and sarah are really growing up, but i like that they remain so human anyway :) i think characterization is really one of your strengths--that and how you make such (relatively) short chapters so intense :)

Wow, Chapter 9 and 10 are great! I am so glad that they now finally get that they are supposed to be together! LOL I just wonder ... how are Eddie, Sin , and the rest of the band/friends are gonna feel about Sarah and Zip?(I like his actual name by the way!)

Damn it, Tirch. Your author\'s note seriously made me tear up but thank you for that. You have no idea how much that means to me.

\"All he knew was that HE was supposed to be Sarah’s first – Sarah’s only – and he had fucked that up.\" This line was amazing and I don\'t even know why but I think with this one line, it really shows Zip off. He\'s a possessive jealous asshole but at the same time, he is feeling so much passion, a regret for being that possessive jealous asshole, for Sarah that he just can\'t handle it and that is amazing to show an entire person\'s characterization in one sentence. This is my new favorite sentence ever. I hope something GOOD happens in the next chapter. I just want sex and then if you want drama, by all means, dish it out but just one little teeny tiny sex scene would be great but if you want to make it a fighting scene then a sex scene, I\'ll take that, too. Obviously. Thanks so much for everything and I can\'t wait for an update, hopefully soon.

Aww im sorry your friend got a bad review that sucks....even if its not the greatest chapter writers are the best its really hard

saying that i loved all the new chapters this is my favourite story i loved it.....i hope sarah at least let\'s him come in i\'m dying for a update this is soo good

awesome writing and updating almost everyday if i had to wait a week or more for a new chapter (like most writers make us) i would die awesome story is to much to hope for the next update after midnight LOL

ash

i absolutely love this story. I really always liked Zip, I hope things work out his way...... any way just wanted to drop a line and say I love all your stories and keep up the good work..

Oh this is great! yay!

Tirch, I was not \"flaming\" templeton\'s writing. I was just simply telling the truth. And isn\'t it kind of ridiculous for you to stick up for them? I never said anything against your works because I like your writing but templeton was setting herself up for my review.

your stories are always so honest and realistic, and chapter 10 definitely reinforced that!
“My real name is Hassan,” Zip whispered against Sarah’s lips as his body thrust entirely inside her.
one of the most romantic things I\'ve read
I can\'t wait for the next update and hope things work out in the end for them!

excellent as usual...can\'t wait to see what happens when Sin & Eddie find out. Hope to see a lot more of this story.

Your love scenes continue to amaze and inspire me. That was so beautiful, Tirch. I actually think it was my favorite out of all the ones you\'ve written. And YAY! Zip\'s real name is Hassan? Where did you come up with that, if you don\'t mind telling me? It\'s so pretty and unique! I like that you waited until now to reveal it, and I hope I didn\'t offend you before by asking so many times what it was. :o) Anyway, fantastic chapter. I can\'t wait to see if they plan on telling Sin and Eddie about their new relationship...