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Aww they\'re so cute!! I honestly hope that Zip doesnt screw this one up lol

Aaaw you made my day when I saw there were a couple more chapters up. I was needing some cheering up. Am I right in thinking that the fluff between Sarah and Zip may be short lived? I wanna see kinky Zip :P Teehee.

hmmm.....i\'m still not sure.....she is sooo a brat- that\'s for sure- but yeah- the whole not calling in for work and lieing to Ava- I can\'t lie- in that situation- I would have done the same thing...LOL- BUT- the whole waiting to tell people thing...that\'s soooo Sarah....and it\'s likely Eddie and Sin will find out on their own, no? I mean usually- the longer you wait- the longer you risk being caught? Oh!- quick question- since this is Eddie\'s old apartment that she\'s staying in, does he still have a key?? :D :D :D

hmm...i\'m still in the not liking her but not hating her mood...

\"his tongue descending into a place only he had been… \"

I forgot to tell you that I really liked this line. It was dirty and intimate and sweet and all around just wonderfully written.

Oh my God, that scene with Zip in the shower hit me like a brick. I just burst out laughing. You\'re still doing great with this story.

BRAVO!

I really like the fact that you have shown sides of Zip and Sarah that we don\'t normally see. I am glad that you decided to write the story the way you have. I think that it is a great story!

If I was her, I\'d take a holiday to celebrate me losing my virginity too. Lolz... the shower scene is classic. =) That was such a fun chapter.
Why do I have a feeling a not so fun chapter is quickly approaching?

Well, Zip\'s name certainly is interesting. i don\'t think i was expecting that. Anyway, awesome chapter, and please continue to update!

I finally caught up! wow they did it. I really hope Eddie and Sin dont freak out too much lol