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Wow~
i really like this... =)
i like the pairing!
great job & update soon =)

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Unbelievable, Tirch! When I said that things can\'t stay perfect, that was not permission to mess with my two all-time favorite people. Sorry. It\'s your story obviously and I will read it nonetheless, obviously, but please. I\'m begging you. And I\'m pregnant now so you can\'t be throwing around complications with pregnancy in your stories. Amazing chapter though. What is going on with Zip? Why is he so wonderful and perfect all of sudden? But I just thought of something. Did anyone call Zip? Because if not, how is he going to explain why he\'s at the hospital if no one had told him Joseph and Lianna? That could be very interesting. Please update soon. Now that I\'m taking a break from writing, I\'m depending on you for updates constantly!

*GASP* The agony...the suspense...*forehead hits the desk*...I am so addicted to these stories. I didn\'t see that twist coming and I can\'t wait to see what else you have in store for not only Zip/Sarah (and third-wheel clingy ex-bf), but also with Joseph/Lianna. Waiting on the edge of my seat in anticipation of more to come.

What I LOVE is how fast you have been updating! Very nice, you\'re my hero. *smirk*
The characters are progressing nicely but their decision to keep their relationship hush, hush cannot be positive - I guess we will see...
Also - great title for last chapter - we get to see Zip without his band persona i.e. the \'real\' Zip behind the stage curtain AND you have a funny scene where he has to hide behind the shower curtain - very well done and that title made me grin. Keep it up!

Oh no! I really hope that Lianna is okay! She CAN NOT die, that would be sooo bad! It would make me cry, and believe me, I do not need that right now! Anyways... good chapter and I hope to see an update soon!

Reviewing chapters 12, Lianna had a premature rapture of the membrane and since the baby is only two weeks early they have to induce labor because that infection is more dangerous than having a premature baby. She can be given antibiotics to fight the infection but that’s debatable and still being research to see if it’s safe for the baby or mother. Her infection might be due to the opening of the protective sac. Her obstetrician needs to make a choice. Sorry I am into healthcare. Zip did the right thing we can only pray. Zip and Sarah’s cover is going to be busted anyways because no one told him about Lianna’s complications except Sarah. I feel sorry for Joseph because he was so protective of Lianna and the baby now it’s out of his hands. Now, I\'m sad. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thanks for updating.

Wonderful!!!

Zip can be so different from his other self sometime. They really seem to be doing good, I can understand Sarah doesn\'t want to rush thing to tell anyone

*raises hand* I have a rather stupid question. Is Zip African American, Middle Eastern, Spanish, what? You mention his dark skin, and his name is Hassan which would make me think Middle Eastern, but I\'m just not sure!!! Could ya clear it up for me a bit? Thanks! Oh, and here\'s your cookie.

Reviewing chapter 11, I’m speechless because Zip has acted beyond my expectation of him being sweet, and I wouldn’t say he has changed, no it’s Sarah who has brought this hidden side of Zip out. When Zip wiped the blood away for Sarah that act itself was more intimate than the sex. I wanna weep. I was a tomato face after reading the first half of this chapter, hehe. Another hilarious moment is when Zip was hiding in the tub and he had to listen to Ava pee, hahahahahaha. Thanks for updating you’ve made my day.

\"I listened to her pee.\" ---> Hahaha... priceless!!! :D

I love the way you write ;) You manage to avoid cliches and you keep your stories fresh and interesting, which is why I never tire of reading them :D I don\'t know how many times I\'ve re-read certain chapters of \"Like a Dream Come True,\" and things just keep getting better and better. I\'m now really curious as to what reactions Sarah and Zip will get when they finally reveal their relationship. At this point, I think it could be anything, from quiet smiles to violent explosions. :P I can\'t wait!!!

Great work, as always!