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excellent chapter. I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen next. you have such a way of creating characters and making us care about them. i\'m sorry about that whole thing with templeton. i do feel kind of bad that she isn\'t going to be writing anymore.

oh God! Im going to be waiting for the next chapter in anticipation! Damn im all lost in this story. I really like what you\'re doing...but please do not kill off the baby....PLEASE!! Joseph loves Lianna and that baby so much.....well keep it up im gonna read no matter where this goes...but geesh ur killing me with the suspense

very good please update soon

i like it that things never stay happy-perfect in your story for long--but that the characters end up okay anyway. oh, and i liked zip\'s reason for not going into the emergency room with sarah--seems like he\'s really growing up :D

Hassan means good or fine , Hossn means beutiful, wassem means good looking or Handsome.

Reviewing chapter 12, I\'m sorry I have to correct myself in the first review since Lianna\'s only almost two weeks early the baby wouldn\'t be considered premature. The baby is fine and babies are only considered premature is when they are born more than three weeks early. Sorry, my bad. Thanks.

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NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Don\'t you dare even think about writing any bad things into this story concerning Lianna and her baby!! If you do, I will hurt you, along with about ALL of your other readers!!

On a side note, I am kinda looking forward to whatever dramatic angsty stuff that is sure to happen between Zip and Sarah....If only from a dramatic literary standpoint....I still want a happy ending....

Sorry I missed the last chapter......bonus for me I got two to read.

I am really enjoying this story, can\'t wait for more.

I can honestly say that I\'m jealous of Sarah.......hot man......hot sex........lucky, lucky girl!!!!!

I hope that Lianna and the baby are okay.......we won\'t hunt you down as long as they are okay in the end. Poor Joesph he must be out of his mind.......as are we. Don\'t make us wait to long.....please!!!!

Toodles
Kelly

*laughs* Ahh, now then, I have things to say. *laughs* Ok, I think it is out of my system for real this time. Nope.... *laughs* Ok now I\'m good. Let me tell you something... this may be true for a lot of people too but I think this is a rule you should always abide by: PLOT>SEX. Dont think Im complaining because the sex scenes are bad, especially if it is because of an increase in plot. Plot wins out with a pinky... definately.
Next, you are right. Run. And hide. And I suggest you do so quickly.
Good chapter, but if you kill off the baby or Liana youll kill yourself off too;-)
Keep writing, another good chapter.... I still think someone (especially Sin!!!!!) should have picked up on what Sarah is doing. Oh well, get that little annoyance out of the way so we dont have to worry about it anymore.

You are so awesome. How do you write such quality so fast? How do you make me feel you character so deeply? How do you stop you stories from becoming predictable. I\'m an avid reader but, I\'m no writer and your writing amazes me. It can only be described as awesome. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait to see what happens next.