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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I LOVED Flame and Leah and I really am enjoying this story. So, no matter what other negative reviews you get, remember, as long as you love the story and you have readers willing to read it (and trust me, I\'m more than willing), keep doing what you want.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alrigh alright- i\'m a little behind on the reviews..i\'ve been busy...and after ch 12- sorry to burst your bubble- but hating sarah is coming back- how could she look Sin in the face and lie to her like that? or Eddie for that matter....Ahhhh- this girl.....hmmm...
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re right, I want to kill you for making Lianna sick, but I will let you live so you can make her better. Anyway, good chapter. You know I love all your stories. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, land\'s sakes, where the !@%$ Have I been? Oh my gosh you started this tri-sequel and I\'m only just now gettign to it in reading. I\'ll have you I polished off 13 chapter in less than four hours. It was that delicious....okay I think I need to eat right now but, that shall have to wait till I\'m done saying my piece, or pieces ...mmmm...right *ahem*
Okay first off I love how you set up Sarah and Zip as being it right at the beginning. No difficult triangle to go through or anything. But still plenty of complications, if not more so, in this way.
I am now in love with Zip!! Do I dare even say more than our dear Eddie? Definitely not more than Joseph. No way, he\'s the best.
But I must be honest, You\'re getting better. You have all their character personalities down so well pat that I\'m almost certian that this is a no brainer for you to write as far as character reactions and such goes. Plot is entirely different on the other hand...
Man poor Lianna!! I so hope she\'s alright!! Please don\'t be cruel! Kids are born just fine two weeks early, mine was, so all can be well you know, um granted I wasn\'t high with fever like she is though...
And oh my things are about to get really messy now huh. Eddie and Sin are totally not gonna believe Zip even though he\'s gonna be totally and compeltely honest with them about his feelings for Sarah. Sin, because she\'s heard it all and knows him the best next to Joseph; and Eddie cause Zips her ex and he just doesn\'t like him much.
oh I love how you cook a plot and story. Keep it up I\'ll be back for seconds....
Alright that\'s it, I\'m going to eat now. hmmm....2 am...guess that means it\'s eggs and sausage and coffee...
Okay first off I love how you set up Sarah and Zip as being it right at the beginning. No difficult triangle to go through or anything. But still plenty of complications, if not more so, in this way.
I am now in love with Zip!! Do I dare even say more than our dear Eddie? Definitely not more than Joseph. No way, he\'s the best.
But I must be honest, You\'re getting better. You have all their character personalities down so well pat that I\'m almost certian that this is a no brainer for you to write as far as character reactions and such goes. Plot is entirely different on the other hand...
Man poor Lianna!! I so hope she\'s alright!! Please don\'t be cruel! Kids are born just fine two weeks early, mine was, so all can be well you know, um granted I wasn\'t high with fever like she is though...
And oh my things are about to get really messy now huh. Eddie and Sin are totally not gonna believe Zip even though he\'s gonna be totally and compeltely honest with them about his feelings for Sarah. Sin, because she\'s heard it all and knows him the best next to Joseph; and Eddie cause Zips her ex and he just doesn\'t like him much.
oh I love how you cook a plot and story. Keep it up I\'ll be back for seconds....
Alright that\'s it, I\'m going to eat now. hmmm....2 am...guess that means it\'s eggs and sausage and coffee...
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, land\'s sakes, where the !@%$ Have I been? Oh my gosh you started this tri-sequel and I\'m only just now gettign to it in reading. I\'ll have you know I polished off 13 chapters in less than four hours. It was that delicious....okay I think I need to eat right now but, that shall have to wait till I\'m done saying my piece, or pieces ...mmmm...right *ahem*
Okay first off I love how you set up Sarah and Zip as being it right at the beginning. No difficult triangle to go through or anything. But still plenty of complications, if not more so, in this way.
I am now in love with Zip!! Do I dare even say more than our dear Eddie? Definitely not more than Joseph. No way, he\'s the best.
But I must be honest, You\'re getting better. You have all their character personalities down so well pat that I\'m almost certian that this is a no brainer for you to write as far as character reactions and such goes. Plot is entirely different on the other hand...
Man poor Lianna!! I so hope she\'s alright!! Please don\'t be cruel! Kids are born just fine two weeks early, mine was, so all can be well you know, um granted I wasn\'t high with fever like she is though...
And oh my things are about to get really messy now huh. Eddie and Sin are totally not gonna believe Zip even though he\'s gonna be totally and compeltely honest with them about his feelings for Sarah. Sin, because she\'s heard it all and knows him the best next to Joseph; and Eddie cause Zips her ex and he just doesn\'t like him much.
oh I love how you cook a plot and story. Keep it up I\'ll be back for seconds....
Alright that\'s it, I\'m going to eat now. hmmm....2 am...guess that means it\'s eggs and sausage and coffee...
Okay first off I love how you set up Sarah and Zip as being it right at the beginning. No difficult triangle to go through or anything. But still plenty of complications, if not more so, in this way.
I am now in love with Zip!! Do I dare even say more than our dear Eddie? Definitely not more than Joseph. No way, he\'s the best.
But I must be honest, You\'re getting better. You have all their character personalities down so well pat that I\'m almost certian that this is a no brainer for you to write as far as character reactions and such goes. Plot is entirely different on the other hand...
Man poor Lianna!! I so hope she\'s alright!! Please don\'t be cruel! Kids are born just fine two weeks early, mine was, so all can be well you know, um granted I wasn\'t high with fever like she is though...
And oh my things are about to get really messy now huh. Eddie and Sin are totally not gonna believe Zip even though he\'s gonna be totally and compeltely honest with them about his feelings for Sarah. Sin, because she\'s heard it all and knows him the best next to Joseph; and Eddie cause Zips her ex and he just doesn\'t like him much.
oh I love how you cook a plot and story. Keep it up I\'ll be back for seconds....
Alright that\'s it, I\'m going to eat now. hmmm....2 am...guess that means it\'s eggs and sausage and coffee...
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:oO! How could you do that!! lol that wasn\'t very nice =P
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story. can\'t wait tell u post another chapter. and please don\'t kill the baby. update soon. keep up the writing.
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Starts chucking everything found in the kitchen..* If she dies oh you better hide....
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tirch, you\'re the best! That was a fabitty fab chapter. And yes, it was exactly what I was looking for and I hope to see more of it :P Pretty please? Teehee. Oh, and I\'m also loving how fast you\'re updating! It\'s great because I keep wanting more and more of this story. I\'m officially addicted to this story!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!