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I had a lump in my throat and my eyes were stinging from trying not to cry. I swear I\'ll have a breakdown if Lianna dies :*(

aww... update soon! T^T

Bloody hell. That had to be the most intense post I\'ve ever read on here. And there wasn\'t even ma conclusion to the problem so I\'m left in this intense state.

Good job on that.

i dont mean to be rude really, gbut i speak Arabic. yes it might mean godd looking but because hassan is a part of a phrase not a complete one. like good looking means \"hassan el wagh\", you cant use them apart but hassan can indicate good looking as a name.

Oh... You are so wonderful at writing angst... That was intense, to say the least. I feel so terrible for Lianna and Joseph. They\'ve been through so much, and this just... Well, it sucks ass. lol I am glad the baby is doing well, though. It was so sweet how Tavian seemed to pull the whole group together. He seems like a guy you could count on in a traumatic situation. Anyway, nice job, and I hope everything turns out okay. Good luck!

omg whats going to happen now??? oh please update soon

A great chapter, though I think the latter part of it needed a little more work. You did GREAT with having everyone deal with what was going on, but there at the end the mood changed almost too abrubtly. Yes, whatis happening with Lianna was still mentioned, but it seemed to take too much of a back seat to Sarah and Zip. Personally, I think Sin is the kind of character that would have had at least a minor confrontation with the two of them even though everyone else was there. Sarah acted like what she is, a little concieted baby, in that she immeadeatly shelled up and got away from the situation rather than having to deal with what unofrtunately came out.
Update, so I know how Sin handles this!!!

Sorry I haven\'t reviewed yet for this story, but I\'ve been busy. I have gained a whole new respect for Zip, he is so gentle and loving with Sarah, and I never would have guessed he had that side to him. But thank you for bringing it out and showing everyone what a good guy he really is with people he cares about.

This chapter was intense, I cried through the whole thing. I\'m glad that Aiden is doing good, and I really hope that Lianna is going to pull through, I fell in love with Joseph and Lianna in \'Like A Dream Come True\', so have Lianna die now would basically break my heart, along with everyone elses I\'m sure.

A hope also that Sarah and Zip will work things out and get back together, because the way I see it right now they are almost as perfect for each other as Joseph and Lianna, Tavian and Madison, and Sin and Eddie are. And I hope that Eddie and Sin won\'t be to hard on them, they should just want her to be happy, and even though they may not like Zip, if he makes her happy, they should be glad.

Can\'t wait for the next chapter, I hope you update soon.

Why thank you.
...That doesn\'t change the fact that there will be much pain and verbal torture if you let Lianna die. (Aiden seems like he\'ll make it)

Wahh! It\'s like reading \"You Don\'t Know Me\" again.
Someone gets hurt and ends up in the hospital and everything starts falling apart.
I hope you don\'t end this one like that.

And how, pray tell, did Sin figure out that Sare and Zip are together?
Don\'t know about you, but I certainly would have missed that little bit.

..I\'m serious about the \"fogging\" and \"lots of pain\" and \"flesh wounds\" and pain.. if Lianna dies.

Oh my gods, that was so heart-wrenching...

This story has really made me start to feel for Zip. He\'s having all this emotional problems piling up on him now, and I\'ve been in a situation that\'s not exactly the same, but similar in the sense that there were so many emotional things happening to me at once, so I can sympathize with Zip. My situation didn\'t turn out so well, so I had to deal with the negative fallout for a while. I\'m not saying I want all the bad stuff to happen, because I don\'t, because I (and just about everybody else) want Lianna to pull through and be ok. But if it should happen that the worst case scenario ends up being the one that happens, it\'d be interesting to see how Zip handles it.

Oh and by the way, it was interesting to see the interaction between Zip and Madison, since they\'d never really interacted with one another in any of the previous stories. It really showed the goodness deep within Zip.