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As I have said on the few occassions I have comented on your stories, your writing has improved with each story. I think this was definately one of your best chapters not only for this story, but for all of your writings. Keep up the great job.

Good chapter! I love how much emotion you put into it, I almost cried! Everything is so sad and it really sucks! You MUST make it better! Please!

You are never getting predictable, so I guess we\'re on the same wave length. Scary. But seriously, if you kill Lianna, I\'ll stop reading your stories. That might not be true but the threat is real. Good chapter though. So emotional. And to add it everything, I hate that Sarah told Zip that she couldn\'t do it anymore. Wasn\'t she the one to agree to the whole \'let\'s keep this a secret because it\'s the smartest thing in the world to do\'? I never thought I\'d say this with the whole Joseph/Lianna issue, because I know that they\'ll be fine, but poor Zip. His best friend is falling apart. Sin will probably kill him, though it\'s not her business, and now Sarah\'s gone.

awww your chapter made me bawl, i am hate when i am pmsing and decide i should read the next upate. maybe some day i will learn to wait. great chapter keep up the good work

HEY, I ALL READY REVIEWED ONCE. BUT I HAVE TO AGAIN. THANKS FOR NOT LETTING NOTHING HAPPEN TO THE BABY. AND PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON. I HOPE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER YOU WILL BRING SARAH AND ZIP BACK TOGETHER. REALLY LOVE THIS STORY. YOU ARE REALLY A GREAT WRITER. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.

What happened to my review about the previous chapter? I\'m pretty sure I left one, and now I can\'t find it anymore.

Anyway, you really know how to depress us. What\'s happening with Lianna really sucks. I really hope she\'ll be okay.

Sarah seems pretty upset but did she really had to push Zip away.

damn it. I really thought that I was done giving two reviews because I\'m an idiot and forgot something. I know this story isn\'t Joseph and Lianna\'s, but are Lianna\'s parents flying in from San. Fran? I know I would want my mom if this was happening and in their story, you made it seem like Lianna was close to her family. Just wondering because this is what I think about when I brush my teeth.

I JUST POSTED UNDER ANGLE. I MENT TO PUT NITEANGLE IN THE NAME NOT ANGLE. SORRY CAN\'T WAIT TO YOU POST AGAIN.

YOU BITCH!!!!! LOL kidding kidding, but seriously you almost made me cry......again....... I swear if something happens to Lianna, I will never forgive you(But I will still read your stories of course) I have gotten so emotionally attached to you characters, its kinda freakin me out. When they hurt I hurt. I can\'t wait to see what Sin has to say about Zip and Sarah. Should be very interesting. I am still sitting here tripping about Lianna, I can\'t really think of anything else........she better be okay!!!!

No... not Lianna. This is suppose to be about Zip and Sarah, not Joseph and Lianna. And then Sarah just had to realize things at the end of the chapter. Here is the chapter where all my ill feelings of Zip disappear. Man, what a chapter! You sure know how to kick them when they\'re down.That chapter was so heart wrenching. Beautifully written and so heartfelt. God I was trying to wipe my eyes and finish the chapter, which let me tell you is no easy feat. Please don\'t torture us and post the next chapter asap.