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I love you, Tirch. You know I do. But please. Make this a Zip/Sarah story again. I can\'t stand seeing Joseph and Lianna like this and I just want them to be perfect because I seriously couldn\'t take it if Lianna didn\'t make it. Maybe this whole situation is your cruel, very cruel, way of bringing Zip/Sarah closer together but still. Just please. Don\'t fix everything in the next chapter but please. Make Lianna and Joseph on the road back to recovery. I seriously would be crushed if something ever happened to these two. And damn you for creating two characters I\'m so emotionally involved with. Please, Tirch. I\'m actually begging you. Such a good story but make Zip/Sarah the focus again. And I like the fact that you\'re not predictable but it makes me feel great to guess so correctly. Update soon. Please!

Well at least you didn\'t die (yet if Lianna does). Anyways onto more important topics that was not subpar as you may have thought yourself. (Based on your comments if I read them right) I really do wonder how this is going to come out. Now Zip is being the mature one and that scares me a little.

I have just started reading this story and cant get enough. I got an email saying \'must read\' you have done something many cant. You have done something right if im reading this in Australia. Dont stop what you are doing!

this story is wonderful. I\'m completely hooked. I can\'t wait until the next chapter. I hope Lianna\'s ok. :S
In the meantime, I\'ve gotta check out your other stories!

Im dying for an update....where is 14 LOL......i cant believe i got soo addicted but question....i havent read all your stories soo i don\'t know if this is true or not but sin doesn\'t know zip real name? If it comes up again isnt that a clear indication that he infact is not using sarah cause he trusted her with something even sin who he thought he loved doesn\'t know? LOL i know the point i want to make but its not coming...so if u understood that ok! this why i dont review LOL

and repeating where is 14 hehe

You\'ve done it again!, Great chapter (and yes I did eat before this one) !
Man is Zip in for it now, oh I do pity that man. And Sarah, no one\'s gonna think she\'s guilty of anything at all cause they\'re all gonna be too busy putting blame on bad-boy Zip, and she\'s supposed to be this innocent, simple little country girl. I have a bad feeling that even Joseph might also, but maybe not, they\'ce been close friends through all this so Joseph will probably be the only one who\'ll pull through for him when everyone runs against him.

I am eagerly awaiting the next chap, as always. ^_^

sorry to say this, but Sarah sooooo deserved that- and again- i think she\'s being selfish towards Zip now for saying she -can\'t do this right now- All right Sin with the icy glare! way to go!...
I feel bad for Lianna....the poor girl..... :(.... i hope she turns out okay...

Reviewing chapter 13, I’m sorry if I’ve implied that you didn’t know what you were talking about. I didn’t mean to. I am in school to learn this stuff so I tend to spew things out. I\'m happy that I actually got it right though. Oh how my professor would be so proud of me, hehe. Thanks Tirch. I can’t gush enough about Joseph. I’m glad this has brought them all together. I hope Lianna will be alright in the next chapter please no more pain for Joseph or Lianna. Things are going to be very complicated now that Sin knows. Sin won’t tell Eddie but her relationship with Sarah might be strain. I think Sarah should tell Eddie. He might not approve but he’ll be understanding, I think. I feel sorry for Zip when it’s finally real everyone is so against it. Another sad chapter and thanks for updating.

wow. that was a very, well, heavy chapter >.< As much as I worry about Sarah and Zip right now, I can\'t help but think more of Lianna. She\'s one of my favorite characters out of ALL the original fics I\'ve ever written, so please please please don\'t kill her off :(

Congratulations on a very beautifully written chapter, even if it was pretty sad ;)

This is one of the stories I check for updates on every day - excellent.