rate_review Reviews

THANK GOD!

I agree somewhat with templeton, the focus seems to be drifting somewhat right now in this story. It\'s still a great story and an emotional roller coaster and all, but it seems like there\'s quite a bit going on right now, and only some of it really deals with Zip and Sarah. I hope you can juggle all these plots and subplots and mesh them well enough together.

But it\'s ok, I have confidence in your ability to write really awesome stories. So even though the focus seems to be a little off right now in this story, I\'m sure it\'s all part of your master plan to bust out some crazy good plot lines that\'ll have us all bowing down to your greatness.

Okay, okay. Lianna being sick is what led to Zip and Sarah\'s relationship coming out in the open, so now it\'s time to make her all better again. Right? Right.

I made the mistake of going back and reading the Lianna/Joey story, so now the characters have even more depth for me and made these last two chapters even more intense. Not saying I didn\'t like it, but you know what I mean.

Still, good work on this one, and I didn\'t think this chapter was below par, it was just fine.

Just read chapter 14. It is nice to see that Sarah is finally seeing herself for how she has been acting, although, I can understand why she is torn between herslef and the crisis going on. It is also nice to see that Zip seems like he is a totally different person, being a good friend and not putting himsef before Lianna and Joseph. I hope Lianna gets better, I mean , she HAS to, you would have too many upset people! Good job and I hope to see an update when you get a chance!

aw poor Sarah I hope everything get\'s settled soon

aw poor Sarah I hope everything get\'s settled soon

Alright I have read all your stories involving Broken Dynamite and characters thereof. With every chapter you have had me in suspense and craving more and more. So you MUST make more, WE MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!! I LOVE THESE STORIES! You have kept me in suspense and I have to say not many have done that. I am officially impressed. *raises his thumbs and two small flames leap up* Two thumbs way way up for our author. What a show!

:oO!! Noooooooooo I like Lianna!! Pleeeease dont let anything happen to her!

Ok so I didn\'t want to cry from this chapter like I wanted to during the last, but it\'s always heartbreaking to me for a guy to cry...GOOD WORK!

Poor Sarah...... still think she doesn\'t act that bad....shes 20 her first relationship that has major feelings involved

Poor Zip....He matured a lot in the last few chapters love him but wish he had let sarah apologized

I agree the focuses has shifted from zip and sarah a bit but if we get back to zip and sarah soon and deal with there public relationship and feelings i be happy

i don\'t think i can stand another week between updates LOL....please i hope u find a few hours to escape the craziness and write and if not i guess we\'ll alll have to patient LOL