rate_review Reviews

I have read all of your stories over the months, and I have to say that this would have to be one of my favorite series. I have loved the Joseph/Lianna series and then the Eddie/Sin series. While I first thought that this story sounded a little similar to Sin/Eddie\'s story I think that you have made this series different. While I have liked seeing guest appearances from the other characters especially Joseph and Lianna, I feel that it is time that Zip and Sarah step back into the spotlight. I think that it would be very predictable and safe if Lianna made it through without any complications or repercussions. But then I know the hate reviews that you would be getting if soemthing did happen to Lianna, like say she dies. While most of your stories are pretty believable, I think that there should be some tragedy to make it seem more lifelike. Truly, where is it always happy endings. I love happy endings more than the next person, yet I live in the real world. But then again thats why we read stories like these to escape from the real world. I hope that you updat soon because I was getting worried when you had not updated. Good Luck!

hmm...the chapter has a \"wrapping things up\" kind of feeling to it....although it\'s left on a cliff-hanger....the conversation with sin and sarah was a little...altruistic...although...yeah...i dunno...i\'m still kind of thinking it over...lol- let me get back to yoo...

hehehehe...you\'re guess was RIGHT ON!!!!!! lol- scary how you know me......lol

Zip could fall in love with Lianna\'s sister...now THAT I wouldn\'t mind.....lol....oh- wait- i think their was an an age problem there......:/ oh well...but Sarah....sarah\'s still a brat.....damn that girl- and yea!!! for Zip- shows maturity- i love it how he grew up and learns from his mistakes...maybe he could fall in love for a cute doctor......... *hint, hint* lol...okay, okay.....i\'ll love whatever you write.... :)

great job :)

Oh my. I\'m surprised at Sin\'s reaction, but then again, it was extremely mature of her. I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed this fic, as I just started reading it, and do hope that Zip will acquiesce to the yearning of his heart. Wonderfully done; can\'t wait for the next update!
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Oh I wonder what\'s going to happen now? Anyway I\'m glade Sin understands and isn\'t against Zip and Sarah\'s relationship

I\'m so very happy! Yea for Joseph/Lianna! About damn time they get married. And thank you for putting it back to Sarah and Zip. I hope I wasn\'t too big of a bitch with my last review but I just couldn\'t take it if anything happened to Lianna. Now hopefully, Sarah and Zip will stop being stupid. Yes. Falling in love is scary and yes, sometimes, it\'s easier to just run from it but if they work it out together... it could be really beautiful, if they let it be. But if Zip and Sarah just go their own ways and not even try to fight the fear, then I\'m sorry. Dumbasses and I hate them. Great update, Tirch. Update soon! My husband and I are going to my parents this weekend to tell them about my pregnancy so hopefully, when I get back, there\'ll be another chapter. Thanks and great update again!

very good... i like these more complex characters. Zip seems to have matured a lot. Sarah is pretty selfish, hopefully something will happen that will make her grow up too.

LOL still reading lots of sarah hate LOL

i still don\'t get it...oh well and noo i want zip and sarah to end up together parish the thought of of setting zip up with another character

is it just me but im lost to other reviews dislike for sarah

awww well still loving the story

just had to respond to reviewers throwing out zip choices lol i WANT sarah for zip hehe