rate_review Reviews

I really love this series that you have written. I like the way that the characters have such close relationships and support each other in hard times and even when happy times occur. i really hope that you do a short set of chapters or a chapter on Eddie purposing to Sin that would be classic. To see how he does it cause lets face it Sins not your average everyday character. I have now to only read Liannas sister Kristen. BUT it doesnt appear to be finished from the first glance I really hope that if it isnt that you update soon! Thank-you for the work you do I'm not a writter myself but I love to read so I really hope you keep writing and hope to see new stuff posted soon.

That story was beautiful. Well done. Cannot wait to read more of your stories. :)

man, this is one of the best of the best story in AFF!

Okay, so I stayed up waaaay past my bedtime to read this story -all the way through, because I just couldn't stop.I actually haven't been reading much on here lately, but I thought I would look you up again because your stories always capture my interest.

This one was no different. I remember not liking Zip when he was in Sin and Eddie's story, but I found myself loving him by the end of this one. By reading your A/N's, I gathered that some people didn't enjoy this as much as your others, but I must say that I think this one is pretty good. You have a real talent for making stories seem less like...well, stories, I guess, and more like insights into these people's lives. It's real, emotional, a little gritty, and honest -which, I think, is what I liked the most about this.

My only complaints, maybe, is that the last chapter felt a little thrown together. But, I understand the need for a feeling of closure (not to mention that everything that happened to you during your move sounds like it sucked horribly!) Other than that, I think I like this one more than any of the others I've read to date.

Good work! And I hope to read more of your stories soon!

~cu-kid

I loved the story. I see a few people foudn it difficult to warm up to the characters at the beginning but i think you did a great job. I really hope you can do a few more stories like these about this group of friends.

Thoroughly enjoyable! I wish I had time to work through all of your stories, but I suppose anticipation won't kill me... probably. I really enjoyed reading this! Your characterisation is excellent, the plot is cute, and it's wonderfully written. thank you.

When I first started reading your fics months ago.. I immediately got hooked and now have read all of them that you have posted on this site!

I have fallen for the Sarah/Zip pairing and will be hoping for maybe a sequal to the couple and their group of friends' stories.. I am sure you can come up with something non-cheesy and if you have the time to write, I will most definitely look forward to reading : )

Love your work!

I just realize I didn't review any of the last chapters, which I find weird considering I follow your stories religiously. Sorry, dunno what happened.
But, now it's over and I'm honestly sad. I thought the ending was beautiful but it just feels like it's the end of an era. You follow these characters in their own stories than follow them as they overlap into others and by the time it's all said and done, it's kinda hard to let go. Just like Templeton21 and Eon stories. Well, just wanted to say thank you for putting up such great stories despite all the drama life brings you. I'll surely be keeping an eye out for your other story and anything you have coming. Thanks again!

great ending. :) gives me the warm fuzzies lol.
Sorry to hear about the chaos of your move. lol. it's good to know that you've settled back into a somewhat normal life now. take care.
-kenzi

This it the 3rd one i've read and i'm loving it as much as the others thanks :)