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by keithcompany

schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I seriously think that you should continue this, and turn it into a full blown romance, with lemon. I read your one lemon with invader, and you are excelent in writting sex sceanes. Your imaganition is also top of the line stuff also. I hope that you continue on this some more.... I think the best part came when you kinda got into the whole spell thing, and revieled her to be a gient.
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schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It has interesting characters, setting, and plot. Hope you will post more chapters.