rate_review Reviews

that was really rather interesting, and i've never read anything like it. the language was brilliant. :]

Wow this story is so delicious! It is very unique and original. The mistress seems cruel and at the same time awesome. She is so twisted, in her sick game of kidnapping, shrinking and forcing war. I cannot even begin to describe how amazed I am by this story so far. I think it is one of your best.

Heya Keith, just happened along this one, the summary intrigued me. I loved it. All the little details you use, like the pins and the spears as weapons, those were great, along with the weapons made with springs from various household appliances, great. As for the plot, I love how the yellow team got duped. That was classic! Lames, they so deserved it. Red was right. Anyway, I loved it, again, great job!