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by evilindsey

person angelfox
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute... thank you! I enjoyed that break from my studies =D
person Siarra
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very cool fic. Now, it might not be a Nobel-worthy literary masterpiece but as a quick, juicy PWP it\'s awsome. The very effect you were aiming for, I imagine... The storyline, or the excuse for the boys to have their romp, was very sweet and funny. I\'m not sure if the decision to leave the characters so undefined appeals to everyone but that\'s a matter of taste, no pun intended.