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by keithcompany

schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. After reading all of that, I must say I am impressed. I can't say I didn't go "o.O;" upon realizing the Tom Thumb fetish, but I liked your writing style and your wit so I continued. Wasn't disappointed, either. I enjoyed this version of the traditional "Last Man on Earth" and it's the first to go on my Recommend Reading list.
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice twist of 'last man on earth' theme! It had a very practical feel to it, PETM, using the system to earn cash, etc. Realistic sci-fi is always the best kind around. I would have liked to see more of the conspiracies though, especially PETM and precisely why they thought men weren't being treated ethically. But on the whole, very enjoyable story.
person fan of this story
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I..................... BEING DOMINATED BY WOMAN...............ALMOST BEING RAPED......................... i cant think in that world lots of woman i personaly am very submisse towards females "blame childhood and perverted older sister" of course if he said more sorrys and please dont hit me!!! he would be like me. i cant belive he felt so natural in there i would be in panic. but womans rule better than man i agree" its true" womans are smarter and more manipulative than us we just cant see we have the body they have the brain. of course there is a weakness in the man if a woman arouse the man at one level he will be very submisse" my sister does that to me" womans body are her greateast weapon. FIGHT MAN RUN!!! IF ONE DAY WOMAN CONQUER THE WORLD WERE IN DEEP SHIT!!! I MEAN IT THEY WILL BE COMING FOR US!THERE WILL BE WOMANS RAPISTS, PERVERTED WOMANS,AND CHILD RAPIST WOMANS. SO WERES MY ADVICE STOP THAT FUCKING AND RAPING, ABUSING WOMANS. BECAUSE THAT SHIT ONE THAY WILL HAPPEN TO US BELIEVE ME! IM TELLING THE TRUE YOU HAVE TO BELIEVE ME!!! STOP DOING SHIT IM SERIOUS!!! I DONT WANT THIS FUTURE
TO HAPPEN I WANT MY INOCENCE!!!!!! BACK I WAS SAVING IT FOR MARRIAGE"I HATE YOU SISTER TAKING ADVANTAGE OF ME WHEN I WAS LITLE"
person Spike of Doom
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm that was wierd... Not exactly what i had in mind when you said amazons... But the plot was enjoyable...Um no sex lol thats a must have i beleive for the final hook and sinker.. but i guesse the story was amuasing and if you write a sequel id probly read it :)