schedule
October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've captured the emotions and the fear and dread very well.
Maybe add a little more description of the charcters and setting?
This is a very promising beginning to a story with infinite possibilities.
Maybe add a little more description of the charcters and setting?
This is a very promising beginning to a story with infinite possibilities.
schedule
December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say this story sounds really cool so far. When I first came across I was a little interested, but after reading it, I'm hooked. Please tell me more is coming soon? I can't wait to find out what happens to Travel next. Keep up the amazing writing. You're good. Happy Holidays!
schedule
November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very interesting idea, and very well written. I especially enjoyed your characterizations and descriptions. I look forward to seeing where you take this -- keep up the good work!
schedule
October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update
schedule
October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So much yummy potential in the story! I wish the chapters were longer then there would be so much more to enjoy!
schedule
October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i realy like please update soon