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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a very interesting story. Slightly unusual in subject matter. But very well written, which is not something you find often on here. Great job.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greetings Keith!
I have to say I enjoyed this story. It has a totally different feel than Invader. Your style prevails but the content, other than the shrinking was a surprise. I particularly liked the twist at the end. At first I thought you may be a student and I thought, "wow, if this is a kid, he is pretty savvy in the man, woman interaction department." Then I read the reviews for Invader and learned you are 43. I am 37 and married to a 44 year old man and we have one, almost teenage child.
I think what I like best about your shrinking stories is that they are unpredictable. I am genuinely surprised and pleased by the course of the story. Your erotica is tasteful and provoking and although I have only read two thus far, they definitely left me feeling happy. Your subtle humour ads levity to subject matter that can sometimes have a bad ‘penthouse forum’ feel if the author is careless or unskilled. I will continue reading your stories and let you know what I think.
I write as well but have only one posted story. Here is the link if you would like to read it. http://hometown.aol.com/isaboesmuse/private/fanfic/Beneath_the_SurfacePg1.htm
monsuza
I have to say I enjoyed this story. It has a totally different feel than Invader. Your style prevails but the content, other than the shrinking was a surprise. I particularly liked the twist at the end. At first I thought you may be a student and I thought, "wow, if this is a kid, he is pretty savvy in the man, woman interaction department." Then I read the reviews for Invader and learned you are 43. I am 37 and married to a 44 year old man and we have one, almost teenage child.
I think what I like best about your shrinking stories is that they are unpredictable. I am genuinely surprised and pleased by the course of the story. Your erotica is tasteful and provoking and although I have only read two thus far, they definitely left me feeling happy. Your subtle humour ads levity to subject matter that can sometimes have a bad ‘penthouse forum’ feel if the author is careless or unskilled. I will continue reading your stories and let you know what I think.
I write as well but have only one posted story. Here is the link if you would like to read it. http://hometown.aol.com/isaboesmuse/private/fanfic/Beneath_the_SurfacePg1.htm
monsuza
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
here we go shrinking again...... by the time I got done reading this my eyes shrunk to the back of my head. Anyways it was good and long. I like reading long stories!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny... sexy but very strange. Overall a good story.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.O Well, that was clever though kind of weird. I laughed at the end - good twist.