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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wannna knnow what happenns i like the story[[]
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting and I\'m happy to continue reading further. You have a good basic plot, but it\'s kinda confusing. Maybe it\'s the grammar, but it\'s still great.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it has a nice start... i\'m wondering why Sabrina left him... or other things in their past.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s good i want to know what happens next :)
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic =)
keep updating
keep updating
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this story has the potential to be really good. It seems very choppy and the grammar is horrible. My suggestion would be to start over again with a little more time spent on editing. If english is not your first language I would suggest you find another writer to edit this for you. Keep it up!!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is too good , keep it up , update soon :)