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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m in love with story.....
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very good please update again soon.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter please update again soon
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! Can\'t wait to see where this goes.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, I just discovered this story this morning and I would love for you to continue it. The story is intriguing so far and I can\'t wait for Ben and Jess to meet up again though I hope Ben doesn\'t think that Jess was just trying to sleep to the top. I\'m going away on a little vacation so hopefully, when I get back, there\'ll be more chapters! Keep writing. I don\'t mean to criticize either because I really do enjoy this story but it might be better to skip lines between dialogue just so it isn\'t one huge paragraph because eventually, that can get confusing. I can\'t to read more!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good please update soon
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories that I have read in awhile. This story so far (chapters 1-3) is a good one. It is intriguing without being evasive. I also liked how the chapters were long. With the chapters being so long, it is like you posted more than three chapters. But I do hope that you realize, that we (your readers) will expect chapters this long all the time. You have spoiled us. I hope that Ben can change the way that Jess feels about men and relationships. Continue on and hopefully it won\'t be a long wait until another chapter.