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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just a suggestion: Some of your sentences seem to be more of statement rather then a command or something to shout about. You do seem to use alot of exclimation marks.. Maybe it is just be but well it is how I saw it. Other then that after reading all 8 chapters straight I do hope that you update soon.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where is the rest of the dang story. I was really getting into it and it left me hanging. UGH!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I like it, good character development, etc... can\'t wait for an update :)
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Ben doesn\'t see them and misconstrue everything as a case of deja vu. Sigh.... such a strong attraction between the two already but so many forces driving them apart. Funny how they barely met and now might be forever bound if she\'s pregnant. Can\'t wait for next chapter.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
again very good please update again soon
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So what, she works for him now. It wasn\'t like he interviewed her and gave her the job. And she might be pregnant too? What luck she has.
He\'s lucky she slapped him. If that was me, I\'d kick him where the sun don\'t shine. What an asshole. Thanks for the update.
He\'s lucky she slapped him. If that was me, I\'d kick him where the sun don\'t shine. What an asshole. Thanks for the update.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just found your story and it great..can\'t wait to see where this goes
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh the suspense.... please update again soon. For what Jess said was true, Ben had not mentioned his last name to her and if he did I\'m sure she wouldn\'t have \"fooled\" around with him that night so he can\'t be mad at her for that. But anyways very good please update soon
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good good good. i can\'t wait to read more.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heheheheh- she\'s PREGNANT!!!!!!!!