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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised no one has reviewed this yet! It's a good story, my only complaint is with the formatting, I see the paragraphs as long line of text, then a short line of text. I don't know how that happened, but if you could fix it, maybe you'd get more readers.
I'd love to read more.
I'd love to read more.