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OH I FORGOT!!!! the first REAL lemon better not be a Danne and Conni one *points claws at Kitty\'s throat*....Liam (or somebody) is gonna save him right *sniffle* right....

I loved your story! It's quite, well, depressing at some points, but other times it's just lovely in it's hilarity :). I love what you've done with the characters so far. Wonderful way to describe each of them. I believe you have inspired in me a new fandum which was previously unfound. Thanks for the kick in the side to wake me from bad writing.
Hoping to read the next chapter,
MC

Yay a new chapter ^__^ I'm really excited to see what happens next. I hope Blaise will come and save Connie from Danne although I highly doubt that'll happen but poor poor connie, I don't want him to get hurt AGIAN! Oh but I know it'll happen and he'll get married to an evil mercinary. It definately won't be Blaise, probably Danne and then well okay I'll shut up now because I'm getting annoying and I don't really know what's going to happen I'm just guessing and hoping for a happy ending and all that. Not all stories end that way though. Hmmm...

i dont usually like reading slash eheeheh but something about this story made me consider it.. and am I glad I did.. please update soon

"Glad to see you've finally found your backbone, sweetheart." xD Yay!!! I know it's near the end...but I just had to tell you, that part was absolutely awesome. I was just happily reading along...I saw that...and my face just curled into this positively gleeful grin of it's own free will. So awesome. Backbone! xD

It was too a long time! *chuckle* Ok...so maybe not eternity...but I'm glad you're back to updating nonetheless. Twins! Now when you say writing about twin brother's are we talking twincest or just...twins? Either way it's boys and fine with me...but I'm just curious.

NO BLAISE/CONNI??? You've got to be kidding me. :glare: *poke* You will continue to recieve the poke treatment until Blaise and Conni make up, make out, and get in bed together. :gonk: *begins poke treatment* (Or at least until you admit it will happen eventually!) Blaise had better win that competition...oh yes...win, win, win! *gets out pom poms* Go Blaise! (Dear God how far have I fallen...I've become a male cheerleader....*sigh* :gonk:)

Liked the chapter! I look forward to the next...eeeevil Danne...:ninja: *looks for blade man* Punishment will come to you...oh yes...punishment will come. xD Please update soon! ^_^

-Moonstar

When the time comes I hope Conni get's to kill somebody....if it happens to be the king or Danne then..........anyway I want him to jump up and sream and just fuck somebody up!!!!.....anyway on a calmer note....this chappie made me anxious...while reading I was rooting for the asassin to get his ass...daaawwell...just read some of your other stories.....they were very interesting and detailed (who needs pictures) *sigh* bless ye 'kitty

Excellent! This is so intruiging. Please write more!

Loving it!

o_o Someone got to it before me! :gonk: Oh well, I got on it the instant I saw you updated! I'm so happy! *celebrates* It's been so long since I've seen something from you...feels like eternity...T_T But a lemon next chapter? o_O *curious* I wonder who? Can't be Blaise and Conni already? Gotta be someone else...right? *paces* I look forward to it though!

As for this chapter...treason! xD Interesting, interesting. Got everyone pointing fingers now, don't we? I love twins...just twins in general. They're so funny to write for...and you do a good job...the way they bounce back off of each other and defend the king. *nod, nod* I really got a mental picture of the two 'advisors'.

You think I should like Danne more than the king? But the king's...*considers* Danne's pretty...but evil...well...it all depends on the kind of 'like' you mean I suppose. I really like Danne's character for the vibrant evil you display in him...I think you do a great job of putting who he is in my mind. The king...he's dark...and very un-fatherly...cruel in a way...but I just never feel like I know him. I never get any...close emotions? He's a very hidden character to me. I feel like I really don't know who he is...and maybe that's just it in itself. That he's closed off and impersonal? ^^; Anyway!

Definitely looking forward to the next chap! Soon please! *whee* =^.^=

-Moonstar

Thank God I could sneak onto the internet... I cut my hair yesterday without my mom knowing so things are a bit rocky with her. Great chapter but it made me want more so I'll probly be on here like twice an hour seacrhing for the next chapter - even though I know its humanly impossible to write a fic or even a chapter of one and have it perfect in such a short time. Thank-you for having talent.