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*grumbles* I must admit that that was hot author knows best I guess......grateful it wasn't what i thought it was going to be.....my heart almost exploded waiting for your update.....I think I said it already, but I'll say it again..good stuff

so0oo happy dat u\'ve updated.. i like it even tho i want to castrate danne oh well i hope conni\'s life will get better or steamier ;) w00t!

Gaaah u HAVE to update RiGHT NOW PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay! I got to read it before I had to go out today! Excellent job. I really liked how it wasn't everything all at once. You leave me in suspense once agian. Now I must go and patiently wait for next Friday and another chapter.

-Michelle

PS sorry my reviews keep getting shorter. I'm just getting lazy and buzy lately.

I'm enjoying this fic as much as everyone and look forward to each update. But I have to say in this last chap that I can't understand why Conni didn't just let Danne zap him or hurt him - fight the man completely even if he wound up with marks - and maybe then the brother and the guard (Liam) would finally see for themselves what Conni's not telling them. So, I guess a lot of Conni's guilt and shame comes from not taking that extra step of defiance for fear of the physical pain?

Now I'm waiting for the next chapter. I want it tonight! I won't really mind if it takes you a while though just its all so interesting. Well, I write a more interesting review at the next chapter when you get it out this weekend. I hope I'll be able to read it I'll be busy for the next 2 days so if this isn't out tonight I don't know if I'll be able to read it anytime soon. Anyways I'll be back later.

-Michelle

this is an awesome fic i am absolutly in love with it.I feel so bad for conni tho ex[ecially when you said in your last chapter that he was denied his powers...i think at the end he gets so fed up and angry that like a surge of power should be released from him....do i hear revenge!lol and there better be a good enging to this and by good i mean blaise/conni and also kill the fucking bastard king

*whee!* ^_^ I'm in an uber happy mood now. (Err, after reading your reply to my comment about Blaise and Conni at least eventually getting together...as long as I have that to look forward to...I can bear through anything...:gonk: ^^;). Male cheerleading is appreciated? xD I suppose I'll just have to sacrifice my dignity then...(for the sake of the cause of course...I'd never actually enjoy the cheerleading role, now would I? xD)

Kay, kay. One ITSY bitsy thing that's really bugging me...you keep saying 'rather'...ALL the time...instead of 'whether'! It's...frustrating me. ^^; (ex. "However, rather it was unexpected or not..." Isn't that whether it was unexpected or not? and "...he could think of quite a few uses for one, rather his cousin could or not..." ?? Sorry. I just...saw it once in your previous chapter...didn't mention it...and now you're using it a lot. ^^;

Forgive me! Other than that...I liked it! Fry him Conni! Fry his balls! :gonk: Ok, I'm through being crude...but seriously! Majick? Cool! With extreme emotionaly fluctuation...comes extreme uncontrolled power!! xDD But...you know...Conni is working real hard on that backbone of his...so if you DO end up letting him break down...I suppose I'll have to make do......I'm still rooting for him! Conni, Conni! *pom poms again* :gonk:

Eesh, my comments are becoming less and less literate. ^^; I do appologize for that...I tend to fall into chatter mode when I have energy...I just finished like...three 6" chocolate bars. :gonk: (Bought a whole pile for a fund-raiser thing...and now I'm eating them all!) Not to mention I just read your chapter...and it's making me like...bouncy! Jittery! You know that big bubbly nervous anxiety you get after a really big lead-up/cliffhanger? :gonk: That's the feel. I can't wait for the next chapter!

xD If Danne's got his vows set on not touching him...I say make him pay! Lift the skirt...very slowly...xD Although...I suppose...Conni's not really very practiced in that art is he? :gonk: ^^; Anyway. Really really want to see more! (Oh, and the twincest thing...is perfectly fine with me! It's all fantasy right? And besides...it's not like they're gonna come up with deformed babies. o_O xD Good luck!)

-Moonstar

wow..just wow. i love and hate this story at the same time. oh dont worry its a good thing! if you can get that strong of a reaction out of me. im hooked on this story and i just hate Danne. grrr i would make as much pain as possible for him if i was conni. please update soon i love this story!

*jumps up and down* I leave for a week and \'kitty\' decides to write another story....I don\'t know exactly what I want to read.....*innocent eyes* maybe something with the main character being a warrior somebody dark.....guess i do kinda know what i want to see...just can\'t quite picture the setting which is the reason I don\'t write.....my stories would leave people going \"uuummm where is this taking place who is this guy and why is he killing everyone?\"
......P.S. the Blaise I had in my head from that last chappie was sooo sexy *faints*