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o_o Blaise did it!!! Or...he's being framed...but something happened! :gonk: I think Blaise is like...some...something...and...he didn't mean to do it...or when he gets angry bad things happen...or....something. T_T I don't know...but you've got me guessing! I'm trying to figure it all out so bad now....:gonk:

The part where Blaise called him beautiful...yay! ^_^ Happy moment...and then that darn slutty boi had to turn up! :gonk: And then he turned up dead...and then...T_T Gah. I'm all fidgetty with excitement...I can't type straight. This sucks. I loved it though! The cliffhanger's gonna keep me busy all week...I must have the next bit! You've really, really got me wondering about Blaise now. I don't distrust him for an instant...but neither do I ignore the possibility that he might still have been the cause...somehow. But it'll all end happy! I know it! :gonk: Yes yes...eventually. ^^;

More! I'm so soooo sorry it took me this long to review...I'm been just so backed up on everything lately. I'm STILL trying to finish White Rabbit (though I'm oh so close...:gonk:), and it's getting me behind on everything else too. ^^; Anyway. i look forward to your next update! And I'm off to finally try and finish my own story...so I can post it tomorrow! (Hopefully, hopefully...^^;).

-Moonstar

::is throwing a temper tantrum:: how could you LEAVE it there?! conni! ::glomp:: oh, conni, poor baby! I'll beat danne with a stick for you! he'll pay!

...::cough::

anyhoo.

well, I wandered into the original fiction section this morning to see if I could find something even VAGUELY good, and I found this. ^---^ and I can honestly say I'm very happy I did. it's wonderful, my dear. and I will EAT you if you don't finish it soon. è.é (I saw that smiley face early and it made me smile. XDD) and there had BETTER be some hot blaise/conni loving, or you will not survive to tell about it. XDD

btw, I saw your comment about giving danne to "the blade man" (nice nickname, btw. ^^) and that made my very happy.

hm...that reminds me. I started writing a story very similar to this back in high school. ::blink:: ::glances around:: I wonder what happened to it..?

Wow........the suspense is niiiiiiiiice and thick after this chappter....the story is comming to an end?......hope Danne and/or the king dies (crosses fingers and toes).....I'm not very articulate so I'll just say that I think it's really cool that you can think something like this up and write it down on paper AND your already thinkin' about another storyline with Blaise in it....I can only keep my mind on two things at a time and one of them is breathing *sigh**walks away crying while dragging lil green eyed monster on leash*

Hey. I just got an email and I rushed here to read. It's a great chapter but as always you leave me wanting more agian! It's annoying but it's a good trait of yours - it makes us all read the whole story because we just need to know what happens next. See you next weekend.

I ran out of chapters at Ficwad, so I decided to venture out of my queendom for the time being. That was beautifully done. That Danne is so degrading, and ... assy. Still everytime they mention the king, my blood boils for Conni. None of this would be a problem if that man smartened up! I just wanna smack him with a 2 X 4! As for Blaise... He's such a... unpredictable mystery. I -think- he really likes conni enough to maybe not mind about the little secret, but I'm uncertain so I'm very scared for the poor princess! Oh gosh. You do drama and angst beautifully. I'm so jealous.

I am so thirsty right now, and I've said basically all I had to say, but I feel like I need to type more anyway. Oh! I spotted absolutely no spelling mistakes in chapters 13 and 14... And yes! I'm all caught up! *proud* But this means I can't read a little every night like I have been for the past three nights... Awww jeez.

~C~

Hello we love your stories I, Taiyo just finished Fate and love it Tsuki is stiil reading But love it so far you keep one writing you hear (-_-)

Yay! Update! I feel special. ^_^ (About you calling me the best reviewer. =^.^= *chuckle*) Sorry I didn't get to it sooner...I'm really trying to work on White Rabbit and my school/work schedule's are changing and...xP I didn't even realize you updated till this morning...(almost finished it then, but not quite...). I really like this chapter! Yay, Conni! Definitely an A for effort...and he thought of Blaise. *squee* xD ^_^;

He's definitely getting more of that rebellious nature going on. Makes me happy. ^_^ (And no problem 'bout the 'whether' 'rather' thing...I know I have plenty of moments like that myself...:gonk: Good job on this version of a lemon thing though. I'm glad Danne didn't completely take him...keep the princess at least partially pure for Blaise...xD ^^;

And actually, one of my favorite parts of this was the description I got of both Blaise and Danne. It defined how very different they are...and painted more vivid pictures in my mind of both of them. (The end especially, with flowers vs. mint....that really fit well with my already pre-concieved thoughts...made me happy. ^^;)

Anyway, more soon please! I need to write...:gonk:

-Moonstar

AHA! I found you! (It's me the rambler from Ficwad)

I'm glad you have an AFF acc too. I prefer AFF to ficwad. I wonder why I haven't noticed this story on here before. I probably shouldn't review since I haven't read anymore (Since I finished reading the 8th installment like 2 mins ago anyway.) I just wanted to find the story to put on my faves list. This was such a great idea for a story. I'm so jealous. Kudos.

~C~

This story is fantastic. But I have to tell you this - You really seriously need to kill off Danne in the competition or its going to really suck. At least if you don't kill him off make so that Blaise wins and Danne sticks around because the stupid, twisted king tells him to, so he can 'show' Conni the 'real world'. And then get him kiled by Blaise or maybe Conni's brother.

I just found your story day before yesterday and I've have just gotten caught up with all your chapters so far. This story kicks ass! I love it! Absolutely love it. It's different from other stories I've read before about crossdressed boys. Very unique plot too. I never would've thought of your storyline. You like to write this story, don't you? You can always tell if an author is really feeling his/her story, by just reading it and telling how much effort they put into each and every word that's typed. I get that from you when I read your story.

Danne's a creepy litte shit, isn't he? Man, I don't like him. I love Blaise, though and Constantine of course. I'm eager to read your next chapter. You keep writing, I'll keep reading. Til next time!