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Gosh, wow, I absolutely adore this. I have an idea of what is going to happen and I really hope I'm right, because they all deserve to be happy (the nice guys, at least.) Also, I was genuinely shocked when the truth about Danne came out and am now rooting for Blaise to win Conn's hand, the good-looking devil always ends up the good guy in the end.
This is a wonderful story and you're obviously a talented author, I really hope you continue to write.

So, since you said you like theories for what might've happened with Blaise, I figured I'd come up with a few of my own. Mine so far are:

a. Danne killed all of Blaise's former lovers, in which case the final competition will be an interesting match, and Constantine might have a bleak future stuck with Danne (or whatever else you had planned).
b. Romero killed all of Blaise's former lovers, and the final competion will still be interesting, because who knows who will win, except maybe you?
c. Blaise killed all of his own former lovers, the final competition will be interesting, though most likely in Blaise's favour, and Constantine will have a bleak future if either Blaise or Danne win (or whatever else you had planned).
d. Some uknown person you have yet to introduce killed all of Blaise's former lovers, the competition will be very interesting, and Constantine...well, who knows?

All in all, it seems as though the final competition will be interesting, and only you actually know what Constantine's future will be.
^^ So get to writing it! Can't wait for your next update, and thanks for sharing such a...well, interesting story.

How could you stop here!?

Yes!! Update! I saw you come online...I clicked on your story...and kept refreshing and refreshing the page like every five minutes to see if you'd put up the next chap. :gonk: Ok, ok so I'm obsessive...hush. :ninja: xD Anyway. Whoot! I loved the part with Danne and Blaise...go Blaise! He is so gonna win unless something 'accidental' or 'unfortunate' happens. :gonk: (I burst into shameless and hysterical laughter for some untold reason when Tamal let his knife accidentally slip...sideways...xDD Gah. I can't wait to see him and Danne. That'd be so absolutely awesome...*imagines Danne's face* xD Hilarious, I swear.)

I can't wait, I can't wait! I want the next part! And I really, really wanna know about Blaise now...we're getting so close! I know you did the same thing...and I ignored your pleas...but I'm doing it anyway...please give a happy ending? :gonk: This whole story has been frought with worry and confused emotions, misery and saddness as one thing after another have brought poor Conni's life into a worse and worse pit of evil and cruelty...he deserves a happy ending. He really does. I don't care if Blaise is a murderer. I don't care if Blaise goes off and brutally slaughters every beautiful boy innocent or not in that entire planet...he's meant for Conni...and they should be together. Happily. They can run away together...and the king can be left alone to continue to pile up numerous new lovers...Tamal can capture Danne and they can have an oddly/violent/eventually mutually insane and loving relationship...and everyone can get the warm and fuzzy feeling! :gonk:

Please?

With chocolate and cherries and nuts (only if you're not allergic...) and gummi bears and chocolate sauce and caramel and...:gonk: Yeah. That's my plea. If you kill off Conni...I don't know what I'll do. If you kill off Blaise...I'll come after you with pointy objects while trying to see you through my tears...and if you kill off anyone else...well...they're not as important. :ninja:

I swear I'm done ranting. Really........HAPPY ENDING!!

-Moonstar

Danne has them all fooled doesn't he. Well, all except Conn. I wonder how Uncle Romero would feel if he knew that his beloved nephew is really a worse perv than he thinks his son is.

Another idea of who's trying to assassinate Daddy Dearest---Romero. Hey, if the way they 'handle' M/M sexual relationships in his region is to kill both parties, maybe he's trying to spread his influence to King Samuel's kingdom, in part by taking out the king and in other part by marriage into the royal family. I'm probably nowhere even close with any of my theories anyway and my favorite one for the King's ultimate demise is my theory that Mom takes him out.

Too bad Cris won't be King. I bet he'd be a good one. Sadly, good king's are rare and are usually quickly killed by the not so good kings who are killed by the even worse kings, etc.

Rats, now I have to wait a whole week, instead of part of one like last time, to find out what happens next! Torture I tell you!


Yes, my story is up on AFF. I had to delete it and re-upload it to move it from fantasy to romance but I did succeed in moving it. Original story/Romance subsection/Haunted by Lia Grace. It's my first story by myself though I am my husband's Beta and collaborator under another name.

*dies* im happy and sad at the same time that this story is ending! We get to find out all the bits and pieces of the story that we have been dying to know..but it ends! Great chapter, I can’t wait for an update. Thank you so much for keeping this story going. I hate how authors stop updating. Everyone knows how RL can be and im just thankful you are a dedicated writer ^_^ I’ll be definitely sticking around to read more of your fab stories.

Hey look everyone Kitty's back! Antoher weekend another chapter. I like this whole being reliable thing. I wish I could do something like that... Maybe once I become a more experienced writer and gain dedicated readers? YOu made it stop right when I was getting really into it! *throws my broken mp3 player at you*

Aww, I'm just kidding I really like it. Danne better not win if he does I'll hurt you or something... Hmmm I really need to think of better threats. Great chapter though. You just made me want more agian which is a good thing I'm just greedy. I need my yaoi and that mean you better write me some good lovin' scenes later on! Ooooh I can't wait 'till next week.. I know you'll be late agin which is OK 'cause RL can get in the way a lot but I still expect my update! *evil laughter* Wow, I'm really tired all of the sudden agian Oh well, I better go get some rest so I can finish my new fic...

What the hell? how can you NOT have the name of his fiance up yet? That is just cruel and unusual punishment to me. Please put the chappy up soon.....or....i shall hit you with a glowing..........stick

Is it truly Blasie murdering these men or is it the wolf in sheep clothing, tarnishing hic ousins reputation so he can look better. Hmmm? We must ponder on this.

Like one of your other reviewers, I don't normally read Slash stories. The premise of yours, was what drew me in. I'm really enjoying it.

Poor Conn, to be put into this situation. I really hate the King. He is so self-centered. Everything is weighed by how it will affect HIM and HIS rule of the kingdom. I hate Danne almost as much. I can't wait to see them get theirs! I like Cris. Liam seems okay too. And Blaise! Oh, I love Blaise! Gorgeous and sexy and caring.

I think Danne is responsible for killing Blaise's lovers. Jealousy, maybe? Maybe Danne secretly has the hots for his cousin?

My theory on how Danne dies? Blaise wins the competitions. He and Conn are married. Danne loses it and breaks into the 'honeymoon suite' and attacks Blaise. To protect his husband, Conn's Majick flares and fries Danne to a crisp.

How the King should die? The power who keeps sending assassins turns out to be Mom who is pissed about Dad 'turning Constantine into Constance'. Mom finally decides that the assassins are all idiots and comes back and does the job herself. She will escape, of course.

I can't stand waiting and even though this is Tuesday and I only have to wait three days for the next chapter of your wonderful story, it'll be torture. I will, however, use some of the time wisely......I'm going to see if I can move my story. I guess it's more a romance than a fantasy, although in a way it is a fantasy. I can tell though that it doesn't belong here.