rate_review Reviews

I couldn't find the hole story. My Google search said that it didn't exist... :-(???

how bitterly disappointing. i've enjoyed all your other work. hoped i'd get to know more sincei like the intro to this one. ah well. good luck with the publishing, i'll go enjoy other authors instead.

I'm for Boise! I want him to kill that bastard, Denne! I want him to love Conni! I want an happy ending to this story!
Keep up the great writing!

Nooooo! Oh gracious. Oh goodness, gracious me. So close! SO close! I swear I jumped right out of my seat and whooped for joy when Blaise hit those three targets...all at once! That was perfectly awesome. Spectacular. I can\'t wait!! Oh my. xD After so looong...and only one chapter. v_v But I suppose I couldn\'t expect more. And you did say you\'d be updating twice a week. So I\'m happy. ^_^

Very, very good. I\'m proud of Blaise, standing up for himself and challenging Danne and....and...oooh! I\'m so happy! And anxious. :gonk: Something tells me Tamal\'s not out of it yet...and twenty-five chapters? :gonk: And here I was thinking it was close to a close...but oh well! The more the merrier. I\'m glad I\'ve got a ways to go still. I\'m really enthralled in your story so far and I can\'t wait for the next bit! (So happy that Aff\'s finally back! Whoot! xD)

So yeah, welcome back! Great job! Post more soon. o_o

(Oh, and P.S. Conni\'s majick! Yay! Go Conni! Another small show of greatness, whoot! Good job. ^_^) Chao for now!

-Moonstar

Yay for AFF being back goodness. Tamaal just left?? He can\'t do that! He didn\'t even care that he lost! *cries*. He should at least have sort-of cared. Overall it was a great chapter. You scared me with the whole \"Oh well, Danne wins\" thing. I\'m glad that they\'re going to fight over Conni. She/he deserves it after all he\'s been through. I\'ve given up on all my theories \'cause I just want it to end happily. Happy! Make it be happy! With Conni and Blaize in marital bliss and with Danne being tortured unmercifully and the King? The king should be killed by the evil guy that\'s trying to kill him! *LOL* not very creative am I? Oh well. I still say that you should make the end happy - even though I know you won\'t and... and for me? Please?? Oh well. I love you either way. I love your story too but still...

Okay, I\'ll shut up and go away now. There\'s lots of other people out there to beg you for a happy ending for me... and the rest of us.

Oh! Thanks for letting me know about AFF being alive and all. It\'s much appreciated ^_^. Now to post the many chapters of my story - if it\'ll work. *waits for Friday\'s update*

A truly brillent story i'm on the edge of my seat. You write very well and your characters are very convincing. Keep up the good work.

I LOVE THIS STORY! I really do. For a long time I was searching for something and I didn't know what it was. It was a story like this. I love the characters and they way you write. I sent this to my lovely friend, Tira, and she was like, "OMG This is amazing." We also took to discussing it at another of our friend's sleepover. It was quite funny, we were getting very strange looks. (Not that I don't usually get very strange looks, since I'm so loud and crazy. ^^'') But, yeah, I'm rambling. I really do love this story. I can't wait to see what happens and yet I don't want it to end. BUT I LOVE IT!

Meep, sincerely,
Cat

Gaaaaa... Leave us in suspense will you?

::sigh::
Write quickly please?

*grumble* cruel cruel cruel....the title of this chapter made me think there was going to be some fightin'...*starts to wail*.......as always good stuff.

Oh gosh... When I was like halfway through, I started glancing at the scrollbar to see how close I was to the bottom. It was sooo good, I didn't want it to end! I didn't want to have to wait again! I just read a manga that made me very sad (because it ended and went onto another story just as I was falling in love with the chars... bakas...) And so I came on AFF to find something to cheer me up, and sure enough this one was updated! You made me a happy woman-ish person! I sooo can't wait to see what happens to them...

You see, this is what I'm thinking:
Romero: the king of the dead (video game reference, ignore my geekiness) is in love with Chris. And behind the scenes they make fiery man-lovin. But Danne is a bastard and ends up living happily ever after with Mr. King Samuel the magnifiprick while Blaise ends up being a wolf in sheeps clothing... or... whatever, because wolves are sexy and sheep are evil. And he loses the competition to Tamall, but beats tamall to death anyway and takes Conni for himself and runs away!

I think I'm perpetually thirsty. But you've inspired me. Now I wanna go write a fantasy story... I should probably come up with an idea first though, right? Thats where listening to Nine inch nails comes in handy. Am I off topic? Yes I am. Ok. Good grammar. Your writing style is hypnotic, and I don't want to see this fic end, but I suppose what comes up must come down... Unless you're in outer space in which there is no up or down. I can't get enough of this story. I hope there will be a sequel or something. You are an amazing author.

And I'm incredibly hyper. I should shut up now. I need to go get water anyway. TA!

~C~