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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! update soon puh puh puh puhweeeeeeeeeeeeez
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very good please update again soon I wish to see what\'s gonna happen next
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s really really good so far :D~~
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh great! =D keep going!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome chapter.... so my suspsion was correct... nick was Noah\'s child after all... anyway awsome work please update soon I can\'t belive Noah didn\'t know that \"kate\" was actual Neida. Anyway please update soon I wish to learn more and see what will happen next.
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh interesting please update soon... Noah is determined to find her anyway awsome work please update again soon
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very good... please update soon, I wonder what the surprise could be but I\'ll hold off on asking until I read more to confirm it but other than that this story is really good
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=DDDDDDD!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting..... Please update again soon this is getting very interesting
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please consider revising this story.
While the concept is interesting, the first paragraph alone made me want to rip my eyes out.
Grammer is a necessary component to any story, and if you brush up on your sentance structure, spelling and literary skills your feedback will increase and will be much more positive.
While the concept is interesting, the first paragraph alone made me want to rip my eyes out.
Grammer is a necessary component to any story, and if you brush up on your sentance structure, spelling and literary skills your feedback will increase and will be much more positive.