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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked that chapter. Please update soon
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s soooo good. the story is well developed and paces itself. though, there are some impressive spelling mistakes. such as, cowered = coward, defiantly = definitely, collage = college, and lots more!! and sometimes the quotation marks get a bit funky. but there are stories with perfect spelling, but the story itself is a million times crapper than yours. so keep it up, i look forward to reading updates, but pleeeaaase go over the spelling carefully!!!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omgomg awesome story so far ^______^ good job
can\'t wait to see what happens
can\'t wait to see what happens
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo this is getting very exciting. Please update soon
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, I would like to read more. But the spelling errors, and jump between past, present and future tense are VERY distracting. It would be good to go through and make a few corrections. If you need any help, I\'m very good at editing and would be glad to lend a hand.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh-Oh...... Nick came out, how\'s Neida going to explain this to Noah???? Oh please update soon I wish to see what happens next
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=D yay they meet finally! =)
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story reads like a 13 year old girl with her first crush wrote this. Slow down and proof read your work. Other than that this is a really good plot.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh interesting please update soon I wish to see what is going to happen... I mean Noah actually came to see Neida... ooooh please update again soon
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh.... so he did know that \"Kate\" was actually her, but why didn\'t he confront her if he knew it was her not act like she wasn\'t. Anyway awsome chapter very good please update again soon