schedule
January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is very good. I see it's been quite awhile since you've updated. Please don't abandon this, it's very good!
schedule
October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would like to say a huge thanks for the reviews. I am working on the next chapter and hope to post it before next weekend.
schedule
October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic. The character of Tamin is really well written. I am really enjoying this and hope to read more soon.
schedule
October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw save her Tamin.
schedule
October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW! That was a great start so far! The only thing that i would suggest, and i don\'t blame you for since it is your first time, is to describe the sex scene a little more and get deeper into the characters emotions. This makes your readers get sucked into the story and then they all want to keep reading. But really your doing a great job! Keep it up! Update ASAP!
schedule
October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting ya must update it
schedule
October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good one, you must continue at least until we find out what Jesse has been chosen for and where is her friend?