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that's so sad that they never spoke again. They must have felt so guilty and horrible about what they enjoyed. Good story

That was way hot, the ending is very different from other stories around here, it's sorta sad, but good... still feckin sad though >.>

amazing. very very good.

Oi, if I had a quarter for every time I read somethin' as good as this, I'd have 2 quarters! Hehehe well, the endin' was a bit sad, though.
Meh, oh well, the overall story was good.



--Assasin Queen

its so beautiful and so sad...

Interesting...I liked the thoughts that you put in from Sheila's P.O.V. The whole berating herself and all. That was very original and I enjoyed it. Although I would have enjoyed more description and everything, it was still enjoyable. The last line actually got me the most.

"We never saw each other again."

That was a bit abrupt and I didn't really understand it too much. They are in a Catholic school together, but they never see each other again? That seems a bit unrealistic. Surely they would a least catch a glimpse of each other again, right? But its your story...and a nice PWP.

~Judith

oi

that was a really cool story

;-)

you should do more femmeslash

ok, it was good, but what was with the ending? \"We never spoke again.\"? WTF?!?! i understand that you didnt want to continue it, but really, that line was kinda cheesy...but this isnt a flame. THis story was still really good

Love, LOVE this. Hot and insistent, and the ending hits you like a brick (but in a bittersweet way). Oh, & did I mention hot?

sob..